*READ THE DESC FOR AN UPDATE* My name is Derrick Young but you can call me DJ. I was living a solitary, simple gamer life before I, how do I put this. Got transported to the land of Talking Magical Ponies? Yeah I know it's a lot to take in...
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completely bullshit.
thats racist..or speciest..whatever, there are other creatures in the world and he could just be a worldly pony. always disliked the 'hey you're in equestria and even though you are human you MUST SPEAK THE WAY WE WANT YOU TO or YOU MUST MAKE FRIENDS COS I SAY SO.' i only have 2 real life friends and i rather have them as friends than others. because they are true friends and would take bodily harm for me..one already has aaaand im ranting and rambling..
5288808 yeah.... honestly this part was hard to write, because I just wanted to set up a reason for Derrick to go back to ponyville, and a reason for him to socialize with the others (I also thought it would be funny if Derrick had to write those silly friendship letters, him being the jerk he is and all). I guess there was a million ways to set that up without this excuse but After many rewrites I still kinda don't like it, and it's a bit frustrating. I could have spent more time on the reasoning, but I don't want to take something like this TOO seriously (I still do this as a fun little hobby when there's not a controller in my hands) so I'll just roll with it and make it work!
And as far as the pony speech, he's just trying to blend... Not sure where you're going with the racism or whatever...
Anyway thanks for the feedback!
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Notice: im ranting and making petty arguments..please let it in no way affect your story..unless you feel the need or something.
i can understand trying to blend, thats not a problem to me. its when in the stories that its more or less forced upon them.
ex: "So is everybody ready?" 'Don't you mean everypony?" so and so asked with a sly smile. "No because I'm not a pony and neither is spike you racist fuck."
..i think my example is from an actual story...
and by racist,specist..it might be elitist.. unsure.. but its forcing others to speak in such a way even when there are other races on the planet, i might just be grasping at straws, but it seems wrong to me. sure, you get turned into a pony and you can say things their way but for the love of all dont be one of the ones that speak as such to other species.
ex2: "Alright Everypony-" "We are not ponies, pony." a griffin said while gesturing to his companions.
i might not be saying my thoughts in a clear way..sorry if its confusing
good chapter man keep it up
5290108 your avatar look like what I think twilights science face looks like lol
I love this chapter it just get better and better read and funny to. I can't wait to see whats next.
shouldn't go it of it
face hoofed fore for not fore
new leash on life... lease on life
Trying to point out things on a phone is harder than it has any right to be!
Yeah :) this one was good :D
DJ looks good as a pony.
Black and white pony OC.......
Must. Not. Rage!!!
6248431 It does seem common to see OCs that have that color scheme.
So you might wanna take a really good look at this chapter again, cause too aften you have people speaking in the same paragraph. You didn't make this mistake in earlier chapters, so Imma guess you just rushed this one a bit. Please take care of it soon, as it's pretty jarring
This is a great line.
Must find a place to go for the guys can getaway so they can hind form the crazy mares. For there own safety with boarded up windows and magic prof walls and door.
The pics in this chapter are not working
Miało być bez ponifikacji człowieka a wyszło jak zwykle