*READ THE DESC FOR AN UPDATE* My name is Derrick Young but you can call me DJ. I was living a solitary, simple gamer life before I, how do I put this. Got transported to the land of Talking Magical Ponies? Yeah I know it's a lot to take in...
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EPIC!!!
i hate flash sentry...the one from the movie. since hes has no personality and was made to be a pseudo-boyfriend for money.
~commercial jingle~
~Every Barbie needs a Ken, Thats why they created you~
dislike this flash as well since he has no personality and is just unneeded, ANY two bit guard can do what he did and have a better name to boot.
good story but a oc in place of flash would be better imho.
5251854 hmm..
I see... Or i could just GIVE him a personality.... Which I plan to do...
I want to avoid creating too many OC's unless its necessary for the story...
5252655 Love this story, by the way I can't wait to see how DJ will get away from Celestia. XD ALSO I can't wait till he meets Discord that'll be a trip.
5252872 yes..... indeed it will be a trip.....
5252987 excellent.
5252655 if you can do a good job then ill accept it. hope you caan impress me as much as the author of 'What is love' and 'This is love' did when they did flash's personality
5255516 probably not, but I'll try...
Why do you keep saying "danm"? It's spelled "damn".
5258925 .... I'm an idiot...
5259949 yeah... I need a beta/editor....
This is really good man i really enjoy reading about DJ very interesting character development indeed.....(Reminds me of Malideus).....
man shining armour takes the top rank for most over protective older sibling ever
This was a awesome read and a awesome read,and funny to .It was awesome see ing SA ,I can't wait to see whats next
There is no way in hell I would ever swear away my loyalty to America for a country I had been in for less than a day. I'm kind of hoping he gets the crap beet out of him at this point.
Im just at the beginning of the chapter and i must say, how did he know how to levitate the bed back down carefully like he knew what he was doing?
What in the nine hells does Shining think he can do to someone who could hurt the friggin' princess?
6356940 don't question shinning. We all know he has that mentality of going in a situation yelling "BLARG!!!!" And swinging at anything that isn't pony. Regardless of how outmatched he is. You know.... That kinda sounds like jarheads.
bet afew would think of celestia's reaction of DJ able turn a book into a muffin would be like th http://cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/br85-1432558544-179130-full
heck i bet if derpy learned of this her reaction would be https://mlpforums.com/uploads/monthly_04_2014/post-25538-0-09483900-1396648028.png