*READ THE DESC FOR AN UPDATE* My name is Derrick Young but you can call me DJ. I was living a solitary, simple gamer life before I, how do I put this. Got transported to the land of Talking Magical Ponies? Yeah I know it's a lot to take in...
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Man, the guys got lot of action based on that brunch meeting they got.
discords warning is making me on edge.
Yet another story where Luna forces the main character to do her. Congratulations
6128331 um...yay?
: |
Ha ha, the Princess sex has been doubled! Good job!
6128150 although he is king of all waifu stealers I wish I'd found out what happened (my waifu isn't twilight). They probably didn't fuck, she probably lectured him about how they were going to do it. Lol!
HAHAHAHAHAHAH
Dear...actually anyone.
Okay, so it's been a while since I've read this puppy. Can anyone perhaps jog my memory on who Lightening is and when he jumped into the story?
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
Lucky guy xD
6130556 he pops up at the end of act 5 part 3. He's one of DJ's friend's
6131308
Much obliged comrade.
And keep up the good work.
6131317 thanks bruh
6131341 what school did you go to?
6131958 Mallard creek high
6132035 I went to Gorham high in Maine. so were both in the same boat right now i guess (if i had a beer right now and was old enough to drink it, it would be right now )
6132055 me to man! My school is in north Carolina. I'm a city kid though
6132133 I'm more of a country kind of kid. (The traffic in the city would keep pissing me off anyways.)
6128203 good...
*evil laugh*
6132901 Oh shit o-o
6133228 I like you. Well great minds think alike! Also the energy needed to create that would be ENORMOUS!!
Funny chapter but at the end I started the, What. The. Actual. Fuk. Is. Happening. Routine.
???
6136252 forgot about that part. There are some missing lines.
6136252 should be fixed...along with that wall of text chapter too.
Man you got tons of spelling errors all over the place. Get that fixed.
6139461 for a majority of this story's life time I had a mediocre editor. I hope to get a better one as well as someone who well help me improve the older chapters. I think back then iI was going through I faze where i thought it was necessary for the character to cuss frequently. Not saying he doesn't in the later chapters but I think iI've toned it down. Also you're not the first to find DJ unlikable, then again that wasn't necessarily the objective back then. I'd like to say that he's changed as well, hopefully more likable.
Anyways your right about the rewrite, I should probably do that, or at least adjust a few lines.
Thanks for your feedback!
YI loveed this chapter it had me cracing up ,I hope he can get them pregers .I can't wait yo see whats next.
He need to think a little about Discord warning...
Good story.
This Luna kinda scares me
it's not rape if you enjoy it DJ
Jeeze, Luna doesn't fuck around. Wonder what she loses in the bet
I know that I thank you for this; I like to read clop lol, And you do it very well.....
6354038
very true....
LOL
Sincerely,
king fap-Equalar.
P.S.
don't say aword.
That's how you know if you're truly in a relationship...
6354038
Best way to avoid rape:
Say yes.