Page generated in 0.071 seconds
Total duration
1,116 users online
1,673,373 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I cried a little when I saw the word count of the chapters.
I love what you did with breaking down her anxiety with the chapter titles. Seriously, that was adorable. Could have been done in one chapter and just leave the title in giant bolds to break her mental states as her anxiety and excuses pile up. But it was done rather well and didn't grow old on me.
Don't like it. Too soppy, pointlessly short chapters, minimum to no characterisation. Still, at least it gave you something to do on your lunch break.
5148392 Well, it was done within 30 minutes. lol It basically plays off her being a tsundere type.
But yeah, it was a short little diddy. I had fun with it at least. Though I just read it on one page to save time. (chapter titles are actually a part of the story than just a throw away.)
Here's hoping there'll be supper served with this in the future ;3
Short but sweet. It's obviously not trying to be ambitious, and it worked just fine as a fun little distraction. The whole thing could have fit in one chapter, but I think the breaks actually worked with conveying DT's hesitation. Overall, not bad.
I liked it. It was interesting. Especially the way you described the emotions. I found the end a little...short/not emotional enough?, but other than that I enjoyed it.
5148117
I enjoyed the short chapters, since I often get distracted and can't concentrate on reading till the end, when it comes to reading chapters that are over 4000 words long.
this was really sweet short but sweet