Apple Bloom can't help but think about love, now that her big sister is dating, how nice it would be to get a colt friend to hug, wander around with, hug, kiss and snuggle. Or a fillyfriend as it turns out. After getting in trouble for arguing with Diamond Tiara (again), they both have to leave alone, it is there that Tiara reveals the most shocking of feelings for her rival, love! What will Apple Bloom think to do?
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Yayyyyy I love this ship!!! Really cute :)
This was adorable. <3
I was a bit puzzled that Applebloom reacted so casually at first, but I see now she did not understand DT was confessing to her. DT's solution to that problem was lovely.
I liked this story, but there were a few errors that stood out which I'll mention from here.
Missing something here.
Times*
Also, that seems like a lot of attentions in a single sentence, but that's subjective.
Bring*
Though it might benefit from a slight rewrite. I understand what the insult is, but it seems a bit off. Perhaps "What, does your lack of a cutie mark come with a lack of vision?" or something like that. I don't know.
then*
by*
I am not sure what this means.
off*
Also I think you can leave out the orange bit. It might be more natural. I don't think you need to specify she was on top again.
That's it.
I hope to see some more of your writing in the future. ^^
That is a pairing that I never thought would have happen.
This was cute. Lot's of little mistakes.
That was cute.
hello new favorite tiarabloom fic
short, but long enough to like it.
I honestly don´t know what to say about this, but even if i don´t know really why i just like Diamond Tiara and Silverspoon, Silverspoon was my favourite but since some fanfic´s where she is not only mean i start to like Diamon too. good work.
PS: Well at least i can say i like it.
I love it!
Apple Bloom's description of love is a Pinkie Pie!
This REALLY needs a sequel, if it hasn't got one already.
Again with this nonsense?! The name, I'm here to say, is Derpy Whooves.
There are emoticons of her face. When you click on them, it doesn't say Muffins, it doesn't say Ditzy, it says Derpy. D-E-R-P-Y. It would be like if I went around calling Twilight Sparkle Twiglet Spackle just because there was once a really popular fanfiction wherein she was called Twiglet Spackle.
I'll still read the story, because at least Ditzy is better than Muffins, and has the same character as Derpy, but still. Derpy is her canonical name, so people should respect that.
the premise is good but the writing could use some help. I noticed a few times you put words repeated like Apple Bloom was surprised it surprised her that diamond did this. It would be better to say something like Apple Bloom was startled it had surprised her Diamond did blank.....