With the Ponyville School Dance coming up, and not having a date, Diamond Tiara sets up interviews to find her special somepony.
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Niiiiiiiiiiiice.
Nice run of potentials, good end choices
You sure like shipping DT a lot
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I'm sorry.
Good story XD
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I'll forgive you if you do it more
Cute, but I get the feeling you put in far too many dialogue attributions in order to push this over a thousand words. I'd recommend using more description, contestants, or dialogue than a few dozen rounds of "(pony) said" to push a brief story over the brink. Better yet, background: Mention the eligible foals who have inexplicably passed up the Diamond Dazzle Tiara. Show her waiting expectantly for suitors after Cheerilee announces the dance, only for the herd of freed students to gallop by without batting an eyelash. Have Silver Spoon keep getting cut off each time she gathers the courage to ask out Tiara.
Sorry, guess I ranted a little.
Again, an enjoyable little blurb. The excessive attribution just got annoying after a while.
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That's a legit complaint though, and one thing I really need to fix. I constantly tell ppl in reviews they need to show more, and yet in my own stories I kinda half ass it
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Thanks for the honesty though
! Hopefully I can get my act together.
Pretty cute and pretty funny. My only possible complaint would be that I wish it were longer, which isn't really a complaint anyway.
Indeed
Hmm...AppleTiara and SilverBelle.
I can live with this and ignore the slight RariDash.
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technically it's also Sparity
Rainbow Dash was the best part.
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*shrug* Eh. Not so much of a NOTP as I just dislike them together.
This...
I love this.
Ship all the children!
You missed the obvious joke of having Sweetie Belle ask for Rarity, too.
No Scootaloo bursting through the doors and getting all up in DT's face in complete and utter excitement and asking her the most important question of all... "SO WHEN DO I GET TO TAKE RAINBOW DASH TO THE DANCE?!" only to be pillowfied and left buried alongside the prior pillowfied RD.
Loved the adorable joke at the end with Sweetie Belle. Very subtle.
That last line...I'm not sure how to react, it could be innocent and it could be really lascivious
I loved Rainbow's cameo. 20 pillows before she takes the hint.
That'll Do, Pig. That'll Do.
Short and simple, but still pretty cute!
WHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAA MIY SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDES IT HURTS SO FUNKING HILARIOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUS HAHAHAAHHAHAARARHAARHARABAFDGGSYDBDAJVCJGWBDGJVASGJXBQJWBDGUQVUDYV
And Button Mash's heart was shattered
DAYUUM that Applebutt is one SMOOTHE Operator!
and now every pony is happy
I have two things regarding that part:
1. That's the most hilarious section of the story.
2. Please make a story where Spike and Rainbow Dash fight over Rarity's affection.
"'Well...we got some good candidates, haven’t we, DT?!' Silver Spoon asked with a smile, earning a glare from Diamond Tiara."
That earned a chuckle from me - primarily because I imagined Silver Spoon making a really awkward smile. I was disappointed when Diamond Tiara didn't bop her with a pillow, though.
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Wow.
...Double wow.
More Shipping!
Love that ending!
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You are right! That would have been glorious!