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SmokeShadow95


Just a creative brony who has a lot of ideas and likes to write some of them out.

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It has been three years since Spike defeated the Dark Dragon King Galeek. Now a new and even darker evil threatens the land of Equestria. This new Madness sweeps across the land like a dark plague. Will Spike have the strength to defeat this new evil? Can he get back to the pony he loves?

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 62 )

O~h is their a spikexluna shipping I see

5133663 I hope there is would be a nice change if I do say so myself.

Comment posted by SmokeShadow95 deleted Oct 21st, 2014

That's one mighty big cliff hanger *gets his cliff hiking gear on* I'm going in!

Well, that spell will come in handy. Though I thought Spike and Celesita would get more love than just that from Twilight.

5261680 Well, if you think about it Twilight loves all her friends equally, but in that moment she had to focus on just one

Damn, thats really all I can say. Looks like someone is going to get an ass kicking.

Oh, the Madness is screwed now that Discord is on board and serious.

Discord and serious together ?? Man hell is gonna break loose

Are you going to continue this?

6217416 I will get around to it eventually. I have other stories I'm currently working on and my drive to work on any of them is not really going at the moment.

Good job with another amazing chapter. I hope to see more soon.

6271333 Definitely. Im working on finishing up this and another story so that i can focus more on yet another story Im working on.

Comment posted by otaku-Drake deleted Aug 11th, 2015

6275458 Spike isn't really being blamed here, This is more of Dash just being angry and lashing out. Since Spike is the hero he was the unfortunate recipient of her anger. Think about Dash, and how you would feel if you woke up from a coma to find that a friend of yours effectively abandoned you. That is kinda how Dash feels when she is yelling at Spike. She believes he could have stopped it, but didn't

Seeing really nice characters completely destroy enemies is away the best.

This is a really good, But I have too wonder what can beat the Superdrake. The only way I can think of is luna talking to smokeshadow from beyond the grave...somehow.

6310049 Thanks! It is getting close to the end, so you will just have to wait and see what happens. I will give you a hint though. Are you ready for this? Luna does play a part

6312954 I see. *Putting on dipper mystery cap from gravity falls* It's time to use my deduction skills.

it really sucked that Spike lost all his magic. magic Spike is the best.
but I have really enjoyed reading this, and the fact it has my OTP SpikexLuna, makes me love it even more. can't wait to see how it all comes to a close.

6319333 Well, this was an interesting story for superman spike.But one thing that bugged me a bit was "end it".The line just felt over used after awhile, but I was reading 2-3 chapters at a time. Other then that, the party ploppers are the best non-lethal grenade ever! But seriously, I'm going miss the OCs in this series.Who knows maybe be some other evil may come up and spike might need to get his powers back.

are you going to be working on different stories. are will you be making a sequel to this one.

6321526 I do plan on making one last entry into the Origin Chronicles but I am working on other things so I don't know when I'll get around to starting it

I liked the two stories, very good.

This sorta reminds me of the one scene in smile hd with fluttershy vs pinkie pie

Now this right here, this whole chapter right here is the reaso why i enjoy spike x luna fics, two misfits that care for eachother

Will there be any more origin chronicle stories

6760932 I plan on making it a trilogy and adding one last story but I have no idea when I'll get to the last one

Hm, I like how you introduce the story in. I just wonder who those little fillies are around that grand dragon. :moustache:

Comment posted by Colorful Melody deleted Mar 3rd, 2018

It always disappoints me how little comments and up-votes there are on this story. This is probably my 8th or 9th time reading both the chronicles and I wish it got more attention than it has. Easily one of my favorite stories ever. Hope you always find the inspiration and energy to continue volume 3. :heart:

8771228
Thanks for the kind words!

So who are these mysterious fillies that Spike is telling the story to?

So Spike I was just wondering when's the wedding?:trollestia:

Nice job on saving mr. Bear, and Flutterdoll is best doll.

Well I guess I'll be the one to say, IT'S ABOUT TIME THEY KISSED. That is all thank you.

Okay I need to know is the pony Spike gave his coat to, a colt or a filly? Cause you say filly then say him to refere to the filly. Also what happened to Rainbow?

How could you do that to Bloomberg you red eyed, black furred whore!:flutterrage:

Well that could have gone better.

Oh soul Magic here take some soul gems you're gonna need em.

The hunt for the marshmallow fashionista is on.

It's time to throw down, prepare to catch these claws imposter.

Luna is going to love the flower

Alright got Discord in crew and they have a way to find Fluttershy, so let's rock things about to get crazy!

Oh so he's your father who knew.:trollestia:

First off bullshit on the mad pony, you now know not to mess with Fluttershy. Second: Fluttershy is the most violent of the main 6, cause what she did to the mad pony and her animal friends prove otherwise.

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