• Member Since 27th Jul, 2014
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SmokeShadow95


Just a creative brony who has a lot of ideas and likes to write some of them out.

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She doesn't need words to speak. She doesn't need words to understand. A deeper connection lies between them. They have something greater than words. A bond forged over the course of only a day, but it will e the most important day of both their lives.

Now with a live reading on YouTube!

Cover art not mine

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

This sounds very interesting.

That was very interesting indeed.

I enjoyed it, it feels brief but well laid out.

This was briliant! :yay:
Short but not rushed. A complet and beautiful story.

6395066 Thanks! I had the idea for a while and just had to get it out. Glad you liked it

that was a wonderful story, though the title reminds me of the song Sound of Silence by Simon and Garfunkel, but the story its self was a little more uplifting than that. great work.

A fashionably short story with good emotional depth and surprising information density without being overwhelming. Nice job.

Good sir, I do believe you've forgotten the 'Sad' or possibly 'tragedy' tags, as this story is certainly both. Nevertheless it is an amazing story, I only wish it had a sequel.

7448062 It is entirely possible I did forget a tag. As for the other thing, the sequel, I don't know. I'll think on it for sure

You have my attention!

And nice reference with the story name

Well, a little fast, but Nicly done!

Nice. Very short, but not rushed.

Big of a.....disappointing ending there. Maybe it's just me, but it felt.....cut off. Unfulfilled. One more chapter/sequel to wrap everything up.

7448427 isn't what Octavias mom doing considered kidnapping? I mean if Octavia is considered an adult then isn't forcing her to go somewhere against her own will considered kidnapping? I guess I'm going to have to read the sequel and find out for myself!

It was rather good if not a bit short

Huh. Well...this looks to be a much darker take on Vinyl's character than I've seen before...I mean, from this chapter alone, she appears to be mute, homeless, and penniless. This story appears to be missing a tag...I'll read on, though.

What is going on with me? Why am I acting this way? My attitude just just /now- I have never treated those ponies, any pony, like that before. Even when I was a filly, I had better manners. What is it about this mare? Is it really her that is making me like this?

Hopefully it is not just Vinyl making Octavia act like she did. I mean,

“That my be, Miss Melody, but the hotel has certain standards,” He said. Octavia stopped listening at that point.

The hotel has certain standards?! Are you absolutely sh***ing me right now?! I mean, this is a preferred customer, as is noted by her family always having a suite available, and this jackwagon is saying no to her just because of a guest that she brought in?! Assuming Octavia is as rich as it appears that she is, she could very easily get that pony fired. AND SHE SHOULD. F*** that pony, and F*** that pony's entire family. THAT DESKPONY DOESN'T DESERVE TO LIVE. :twilightangry2:

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