Princess Celestia travels deep into the inner chambers of the Canterlot Archives to get her favorite book, the last remaining first-edition copy of The Tales of the Colts Grimm. Read along as Celestia remembers her childhood and reads through the sacred stories that have been read for generations by ponies all over Equestria.
AN: This story could easily need all the story tags, so don't think there might not be comedy or sol stories here! (Just no super-dark. It is a foal's book, after all.)
Chapters (2)
Aw...
But the Grimm's tales were dark in a way that would make Jigsaw squirm.
'tis ok to not have dark stories, though.
It could use some work, but the story has potential.
My main concern is that the parts with Celestia and the stories themselves get mixed up.
Maybe you could use a horizontal line to split them? Or maybe just add a space there.
Either way, this wasn't that bad, I look forward for other stories.
5029948 I have fixed the issue with the point of views. Thank you for your feedback! The second chapter is already mostly done, so it should be out late today or tomorrow.
The Sisters Grimm was my favorite book series at my old school. Are the stories going to be similar to the actual books? I haven't read yet because I don't have the time.
5030081 Yes and no. The first chapter is a tale that I made up. The others will be tales by the brothers grimm, but not super famous ones like Cinderella and such. I'm going for fairy tales most people have never read or even heard of. But if you think I should do more popular tales, just tell me.