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When Twilight Sparkle finds a prophecy in the library of the old castle, she dismisses it as nothing. But when Spike reads it, he is chosen along with 4 others to protect Equestria by following the quest that will save them all from a new enemy. They will have to face rough seas, monsters, and new civilizations if they, and Equestria, are to survive.

New cover art by ME!
Gore will not be until later chapters. I might not ever get gory, just setting it up as a precaution.
What should happen to the Five next? Should they meet a new race, face a sea monster, or get caught in a storm at sea? Comment below on what you think should happen next in the journey.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 67 )

My god I don't like dinky as one of the choices but this story sound awesome I'm totally reading it

Just finished and it was awesome make another chapter plz

This looks really cool! :yay: I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Thanks a lot, this feels awesome!!:rainbowkiss:
Thanks for the support, I hope I don't disappoint you!:twilightblush::pinkiehappy:

4833430 Hmm, am I the only one who thinks that Twilight Sparkle mocking a prophecy is irony when she doggedly pursued the prophecy of Nightmare Moon when nopony else (except possibly Celestia from the shadows) took it seriously?

No I don't want it to end make more this is awesome I dont ship spike and dinky personally I'm an applespike fan I use to like rarispike but I love this fic

4834462 This is no where near ending. I'm working on the third chapter currently.:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by cipherscriptures deleted Aug 11th, 2014

4833719 Yes but i think that twilight is dodging the prophecy because it isn't about her. Now think about it there is a theory Twilight is the meaning of life. Now she would think she is pretty important. Now if you take that theory and combined it with this story then maybe twilight thinks the prophecy is just a piece of paper because it isn't about her. The meaning of life. But spike is the meaning of life's brother so he is the meaning of something too. The prophecy chose him because he is the meaning of something to be discovered. Just like in the story how he is going to discover something!

But hay it's just a theory

Yes thank you*cries* thank you I love this story.

I like it are you making the fifth chapter soon

4839687 Working on it now. Should be out tommorow.:twilightsmile:

4840305 YAYYAAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAAYYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYYAYAYA!!!!!!!!!!

4840732 Thank you I love this story and I don't like most stories like this so I dub thee a Cookie.* hands cookie*

YAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYYAYAYAYA can't wait till next chapter

Ayayyayayyayaya new chapter I'm not a Apple Bloom x Pip fan I like Snails x Apple Bloom.( yes I'm that person.) but I love this fic none of the less or whatever

4859518 I know, me either. I just wanted to explain why Dinky wasn't a CMC. I like Apple Bloom and Spike a bit, believe it or not.:moustache:

4860035 Here how it goes with me ( sit back this may take awhile.)

Applespike
Snailsbloom
Raripants
Twiflash
Rainsoar
Pinkie cheese
Fluttercord
Lunax sombra
Candencearomor
( F Celstia and chysilas.)
Doctor Derpy
Bigcheerilee
Silvertiara
Sweetie mash
Scootsrumble
Lyrabon
Neon pon3

Still an awesome fic keep it up.( remember me?)

NO NOT THE CLIFFHANGER WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????????????????

still an awesome fic.

Im sorry but this is way too fast for me :ajsleepy:

Comment posted by lyra_lover777 deleted Aug 21st, 2014
Comment posted by lyra_lover777 deleted Aug 21st, 2014

4881886 Yeah, I do. Thanks!:pinkiehappy: I just started school so next chapter should be in a few days.:pinkiehappy:

4885703 YAYAYYAYAYAYA What grabs are you in middle school just started for me

Trying to imagine Dinky's voice.

DINKY!!! FIGHT FOR YOUR SUGAR DRAGON!!!!!

Yep I'm with you like two other people ship apple bloom and snails. And one of them includes me so your not alone in the I ship this person and noone else does community.

Still an amazing fic.

Yes new chapter I'm going to read it then rate it!!!!

I give it a 10/10 but I'm going to have to dock a I/2 point becaused it confused me in the middle so 9 1/2 out of 10 food job and keep up the good work!

I hope the next chapter is just as good!

4928681 What confused you? Just want to know so I can fix it.:pinkiehappy:

4928842 this paragraph:

" Fight for me Caroline! Fight for fallen princess coral."

Is Caroline a spider or ghost pony or it the earth pony and she is just crazy. Another thing that got my attention was how did princess coral fall and is coraline like the prince or a sister and is the earth pony like subject or a sister.

4928886 Coraline is the earth pony. [Princess Coral will be delved into later in the story.

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Imagine that she speaks in high pitched Japanese Schoolgirl tones.... complete with subtitles.

"Spike-Sempai!!"

-Spade

Comment posted by lyra_lover777 deleted Sep 6th, 2014

4962560 Thanks! Can't wait for part 3 of your story!:twilightsmile:

you better be im hoping to make it almost 10000 words long :rainbowkiss:

I just finished reading it and DAMN YOU TIREK OR SCORPAN I DON'T KNOW. DAMN YOU DMAN YOU HOW THE FUCK DID YOU ESCAPE DAMN YOH TO THE DEATHS OF HELL FROM ONCE YOU CAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NEW CHAPTER YES!!! Gonna read it then rate!

9/10 just because I don't like the way someone is always captured or assumed dead In most chapters. I would have given you a 6/10 but I love the way the story is taking dark turn so finally score:

9/10 congrats you aced it!

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