This story is a sequel to A New World, a New Story
Lea lived in her home in Johto with her family of pokemon. Just when something was going wrong, everyone seemed to fall asleep, and Lea soon followed.
Waking up, Lea found herself an Umbreon, but no one she knew was around. Instead, a winged Ponyta and small Rapidash find her and make her miserable. But after her eventual escape, the former human has a lot more to run from.
This is a side story to: A New World, a New Way
If you like this, check out the original story, or some of the other side stories. If you want to create your own side story, read the original first to get the full story.
Big thanks to Zeusdemigod131 for pre-reading the some of the chapters from the story, and helping a little with it.
editors are Arcticbrony, Goggari, Archeo_Lumiere, and (shoot i need to find them again)
You have a great idea here but a poor execution. I would try fixing this chapter before continuing if I were you. Honestly, I liked it, it just needs some TLC
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That quote was perfect.
4946450 Tender Love and Care.
I'm going to give this a fav, a like, and give you a follow, the first two because of the story, the third as a kind gesture between authors.
I saw some spelling errors here and there, but nothing majorly story breaking. Its late here, so I wont be going over anything tonight, but I'll send you some corrections tomorrow if I can. (I'm super busy with school and all that.)
Anyways, I like the story, you hit me in the feels, and I'm ready for more.
So, I wish you good luck in all your writing endeavors
Bravo. This story contains both the quintessence of an excellent concept, and the spark of creativity all stories need. All it needs is a little patience, practice, and persistence.
Also, as a spot of advice? There is a fairly large crowd on this site that will automatically downvote a story if it's set in some other author's universe.
I'm going to fucking kill those ponys!!!!!
I apologise for my language
4946391 what do you think it needs? i'm open to suggestions and honesty, i was working on this at a time i was not fully awake, so that might have been some of the problem.
4947046 it's fine
4946756 thanks! Yeah, I know about that. still, i'm gonna do this, and no one is gonna stop me
4946543 thanks for the support! I'd love to have help with any mistakes i missed and i'm glad you'd like to help. also just as a hint, the next chapter involves Lea thinking lots of ponies are mean to pokemon cuz she never sees the wanted poster. dun dun dun.
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4947144 I think it needs a slower pace and more elaboration.
4947424 the fast pace is only in this chapter. don't worry
4947948 Well that's good. You still might want to fix that for people would would read your story later on. You know, get more followers and such.
Where are stories with one human turned pokemon?
4948643 what do you mean? are you looking for more? if so, go here: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/203478/a-new-world-a-new-way-fan-group
Well poo
4949574 what?
4949749 ya know what? I realized that that comment made no sense whatsoever but I still like the story :)
4949313 ty
When this place hears Celestia's decree about pokémon having rights, I'm pretty sure there will be a mass panic.
Is this that place where Twilight decided to make a law giving Pokemon equal rights?
Suddenly arceus appears
4989253 not really. remember, Lea was locked away from the outside world for about a week. who knows what could have happened to those pokemon, and without pokemon centers, how do they get healed when the ponies don't really know how to heal them. basically, she's gone through some trauma and automatically thinks the other pokemon have too.
4990168 ah, no
4990031 nope, that was Trottingham, this i'm having set in Hoofington
4991284 Hoofington seems in need of a hero. Lea may need some help before she can tackle this threat. (ELBOW ELBOW) but where to find it? (COUGH COUGH)?
4993709 wait til chapter 5 or 6 please. (it will be chapter 6 if enough people say shiny to learn a bit about lea as a human)
4996151 hey, your story. I wouldn't want any other authors pressuring me into crossovers.
Oh, and SHINY.
5002748 crossover of stories might occur
I hope groundon comes and saves the Pokemon.
5029905 i am in no control of Groundon right now. only Zeus does
King carapace celestia n arceus gonna wreck this towns shit. >:L
5046479 show this story to your friends! in needs more views!
5051464 Hmm ok then
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5167289 I give up! You are being too cute!!!!
5167289 I have no emotions, this effects me in no ways.
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