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One day in Minecraft, a lone Enderman walks into an abandoned castle and finds an old enchantment book. After reading the text, he winds up in the colorful land of Equestria. Now he must learn to live with the inhabitants and learn the magic of friendship. Little does he know that a long lost evil has returned for revenge.
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The story's premise seems interesting.
You may want to get an editor to check your tenses and all
No.
I like it so far its good keep up the good work my fellow brony or pegisister
I got to admit l would like it if the chapters were a bit longer but the story is good
6050375 I'll try to make it longer. And I'm a Brony to let you know.
I came here and didn't expect this story to be very good but so far I'm actually enjoying it. it's been a while since I last played minecraft and it's nice to have a reminder of how cool it was. I'm hoping this turns out well
i laughed my ass off!!!
lol
I really am enjoying this story but I'd like to point out the fact that there's quite a few errors in this so you may have to edit the story and find them
Also are you able to make longer chapters? I would love that
I'll try to make them longer than a few hundreds. I'll try to get to a thousands of so.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!
This. Book. Is. AMAZING!!!! Great job so far! Photo finish needs to see this!!
still liking this story but there were a few grammatical errors that made it a bit confusing at some points but other than that I like where this is going and I hope for more
My only problem was that it moved too fast. Some parts were too short, and I have questions and comments: 1-What did Celestia think he was, and why did she just attack him? 2-Im pretty sure that trying to find living arrangements would take waaaaay longer 3-Where the hay is science Twilight? Remember how she was with Pinkie? I'm pretty sure she wouldve gone crazy about Shadow just existing ._. But other then that, great job and keep on writing!
6067757 Well, for you first question, Celestia thought it would be an old foe. Remember, this is before "The Crystal Empire" episode. She thought that Shadow could of been one of Sombra's minions. Shadow does look similar to one. And yes, I'm adding minions to the episode.
Second question, I thought it would be good for Shadow to have some place to live, but he still has to gain the trust of the citizens of Ponyville. So, it's going to be a rough road for our friend here.
For your final question, "Science Twilight" will come soon when things calm down after the fight. I'll probably add that to the next chapter. He'll explain almost everything about MInecraft or Craftia. Which ever comes first.
I'm still trying to figure out which pony would Shadow be with. It's either Luna, Rarity, Twilight, Fluttershy, or even Chrysalis when she comes back.
I find this story very interesting but in a couple parts when you say "your" or "you're" you just say "you" for some odd reasons, they're probably be some more mistakes that is one I saw quite a lot but either way I still enjoyed it and excited to see what comes next
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6072744 You think so?
6072766
Yes.
6067819 OK, that explains it
Hmmmmm......Special somepony......Special somepony....OOOOOOH I GOT ONE!!! LULU!!! (Luna) LIKE, THEY BECOME BESTSIES, AND THEN THEY GET EVEN CLOSER!!!! Also, here's dat ender screech you wanted. it should work...should
sorry if it doesn't 
https://youtu.be/bYrv3Dl3c84
I think you made the first few chapters to short, i more or less learned, you should try to have 1500 words or something like that, that alone should make the story already better.
Nothing special till now, but not bad.
THe chapter is again nothing special, but i like what you have writtne, i guess if the chapter would be longer, there would be much more to like.
I think it is Stallion, not Colt, wasn´t Colt only for the little ones?
This longer chapter already feels better, i sadly can say much more about that, but i am at least more happy with this chaoter here.
Honestly, did she really knew this because of what Twilight has written? Shouldn´t he be something new to Equestria?
It is werid that Celestia wants to battle him that fast.
6067757 i agree with him/her here, you could have explained a few things better, or have written a little scene with Celestia, and what everyone thought about him, or at least the pony which is going to be his romance.
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while this is your story, and there is no real rule for Celestia, and how she should notice and possible Enemy, but i am not sure if that what Twilight told her, would be already enough to think of the worst.
that is okay, but she should probaby apologize as well, i am not sure how bad it was, but they tried to attack him as well, even befor they were sure, but you said they thought he would be bad, and he did beat one of them.
The story is gettig better, i am not sure if some of the things i noticed in this chapter, are really mistakes, or just personal preference, but i just tell you what i think i found.
Okay i think i finally start to really like this, for your first story it isn´t bad, at least not at the point your chapters got longer, but i read the whole thing pretty fast because of that.
What thaaaa buck?
I tagged it Gore and Dark for a reason.
It is hard to say, if he should be able to be hurt that easily or not, but honestly i think i like it better this way.
Great Power, doesn´t have to mean, that his Body is like a powerfull natural shield, but some people make their Characters like that i suppose, i think i evne saw one like that.
6088055 Exactly, thank you. Some heroes may have powers, but they sometimes don't have good defense. Although, soon Twilight will teach him spells of defense. Like a shield spell or a safeguard spell.
*does a twilight version of the happy dance* YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!!!!! SHADOW SHADOW SHADOW SHADOW SHADOW SHADOW SHADOW!!!! HE SAVED A FLIPPIN' PRINCE!!!! One question, when will the Luna Shadow shipping commence? I need some fan art fuel!
I really like Shadow, even if he is probably that OP, that he could just kill Tirek with a slap in the face.
I guess i like the way you are writing this story or this Character.
6114241 Thanks, also, I'm trying to make it seem like Shadow to act a bit cocky like Rainbow Dash, but also serious like Applejack and Twilight.
Another note, I'm not trying to make him powerful like Celestia and Luna combined. He will when he gets really, really, angry. And with little boost from any magical objects. EX: [Alicorn Amulet, Elements of Harmany, and Crystal Heart.]
6113897 It'll come soon after the Crystal Empire chapter is over. They will meet when Shadow gets back and relaxes on her favorite spot by accident. I'm planning on getting their relationship up slowly, but not too slow.
6114715 I am not sure how fast i would like it to happen, but i am happy to have the shipping soon.
"But not all of us mobs want to fight! There are some that try to be friends, but most of the others freaking mobs have to ruin it by being nothing but mindless killing machines! It's not fair! It's not fair!" *SSSCCCRRREEEEEEEEEEEEECCCCHHHH*
This reminds me of uncle Leo's account of the super mutants and fev virus from fallout 3
6150255 I just thought I would be decent to add drama to the story.
all Enderpony serve enderdragon hydra-media.cursecdn.com/minecraft.gamepedia.com/4/4f/EnderdragonFlying.gif
I like this, but don't you think it's a bit short?
You forgot rabbits
Also, I have found a problem to that sentence. Every time an update in mine craft that features new land mobs, you have to add them to that list
The last part~
Shadow:reactionface.info/sites/default/files/images/1287666826226.png
Sombra:i.imgur.com/hUp8e.jpg
i suspect creepers in the future!
more please!!!!
6400427 You will, along with some other Mobs, and with some
kick-assdesigns.6401469 just did you get permission to use that art work skeleton pony from
Jan Animation Studios? i.ytimg.com/vi/w1NEtnClzzM/maxresdefault.jpg
6403149 I didn't get the picture from there. I got it from google, but I couldn't find the creator's name anywhere so I could give them credit. My bad.
6403192 you really didn't know it was Jan Animation Studios. it was in his music video!
6403213 I did know, I've seen it. I'm just saying that the next pictures are created by different people of their own design. If you want, I could send you some pictures of the upcoming Mobs to you for a sneak peak, and you can tell me what I can use and what I can't.
Again, I'm sorry. This is my first time uploading pictures instead if music from my last chapters.
6403334 all you need ask artist next time for permission.
6403337 I'll try, but do you still want a sneak peak just to be sure?
6403342 yes.