Sveta Ichimo is a normal Pokemon Breeder. No really, just a Pokemon breeder. Even specializes in Normals. Up until today, he worked as an adventuring breeder, trying to figure out how to make Poffins, Pokecubes, and even Pokepuffs better.
Now, being forcibly removed from a world he was quite happy in to one that is brighter, more colorful he will be presented many a problem. In his new, much smaller body, he will have to act towards moving on in this strange new world with such people, err, ponies in it.
A New World, a New Way sidestory.
Chapters (3)
I think that this story is excessively descriptive for my tastes. I found two mistakes for you though.
5004756 Sorry it was not quite to your tastes, but thank you for pointing those out! I hope it might grow upon you.
I loved the intro (from chapter one I mean) very Poke-movie.
good start. just going to point out that you used the character Cassandra twice in this chapter.
and from what i gathered what each character is in pokemon status
Sveta- Eevee
Terra - Zigzagoon
Tops - Spinda
felix - Stoutland
Braum - Farfetch'd
Cassandra - Luxio
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Why thank you! It was fun writing it
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Sorry if it's a bit detail heavy, I just had an idea in my brain and went with it.
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Yes, Furret , Yes, Linoone, Yes and Yes.
There was a mix up for a while when I confused Terra with Cassandra, but that is fixed now. Thank you!
Also, for clarification I will include the species name of each in their appropriate Section.
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i was leaning towards furret but in the disciption i got mixxed up with the zig zag pattern. Also the stoutland because of the good sense of smell. but your story and i can't wait for more.
also was there a Rattata i missed.
Interesting so far, but i noticed a fairly sizable error.
You wrote that the Pokemon that found the Teddiursa was Cassandra, yet in the very next paragraph, Cassie wakes up in a garden?
Sveta's reaction was amusing though...
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Yes It did, but after VoidKat mentioned it, I do believe it is fixed.
good so far, looking towards the next chapter
Welcome to the world of being a furry quadruped. Seth feels your pain and sympathises with you.
Nice chapter though, and that arm... did that Honedge cut off his arm!? Holy crap!
I had to re-read this entire story because I forgot what it was about
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