A side-story of A New World, a New Way I wrote with permission from the original author, zuesdemigod131.
This is the story of Eva, a young former Top Ranger, and her partner Pokémon, Zero, and how they first met Gene and Belle on Earth, and how they reunited in Equus years later, with their forms radically changed.
Pokemon-MLP:FiM crossover. Don't like, don't read.
NEW:
Following Part 2, we will be going back in time to Earth for some backstory of Eva and Zero, as well as how they reacted upon arriving on Equus.
NEW #2:
Due to issues involving my OCs, I will be changing the story behind Lovely Feathers so it will be more AU and won't involve alicorn oc. Be sure to keep an eye on the Equus arrival chapter for changes. Also, thanks to the Stag Prince for helping in rethinking the idea behind Lovely Feathers.
Please enjoy. Comments and critique are greatly accepted ^^
Just before I read this here, you should double-check your synopsis. Few errors.
Nice, short story about seemingly trivial meetings.
I like it.
Shouldn't that be a "he".
Now that I read this, I really enjoyed this. Simple, short and enjoyable. A wonderful one-shot. Though you have me curious, if she was raised in the region with the strongest Ranger presecence, why were her parents able to instil such values in Eva against the entire society?
Nice and all, but it really needs some more working. Whenever you skip from a scene to another you should put some kind of "divisor" between, or it just gets confusional.
I don't know if you talked with ZeusDemi when writing this, but I guess I'll put it in Non-Canon folder.
4935895 Thanks for letting me know. I just fixed that
4935134 I'm actually gonna get to that in future chapters. I should have the next one up either tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for reading it
4935040 Thanks so much^^
So there's a fun story about how/why I got around to reading this story (Which is really good btw), you see, I was at a friend's house and it was around 4:55 and I decided to head home. Thus when I got home I found out that what I'd thought was a house key was not in fact a key to my house... so I'm sitting here in a garage at 5:15 waiting for 6AM and reading your story :) Which is really good!
5486974 Oh dear, but I will admit that's pretty funny. Glad you liked the chapter :)
quick question: in the author's note, you say
but the story says complete. why is that?
5584929 That was my bad. I fixed it, so if you're still interested, just let me know.
.... Muse, what is this?
6034845
my thoughts exactly...
Lord Zeus, do you have some sort of guidelines/rulebook for situations like this?
6035245
Yes, they are.
DON'T MAKE ALICORN OC'S!
Are you still writing this? It says canceled.
6273893 I'm not really sure at this point. A lot of people have been real negative towards the story ever since I brought my OC Lovely Feathers into the story since she's an alicorn. However, if you think that it won't bother other readers as well as yourself, I may very well consider restarting it.
6276283 I haven't read it that far in yet. It was still just a one shot when I last looked.
I prefer to judge a story on its quality, but if not done right an alicorn oc could be a story killer. And you were in canon so ...should have asked Zeus before doing it, he would have said no which would have saved you from any negative effects. He also doesn't like fake pokemon.
6276296 I suppose for the sake of just the story I could rewrite it so Lovely Feathers is just a unicorn, although in her original story she would still be an alicorn. I guess the idea of putting my alicorn OC in the story didn't seem so bad, considering that that oneshot was the only time my OCs cross with the main story line
6276363 lol I love the idea of calling a unicorn by the name of Feathers! Just rewrite everything from where she first shows up so she doesn't have wings.
Not sure if he would go for it but you could ask Zeus if he would let her still be royalty. If not then this would just be an alternate universe where she never ascended.
6276391 Hmm, maybe a pegasus where she was like a high-ranked official in the royal guard, raised by Celestia as a child. I like the idea of an AU. Thanks for the advice. I'm gonna get started on that now!
6276441 Be sure to clear the raised by Celestia part with Zeus.
6276441 any progress?
Ah....MEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...Yay