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Blake likes Roseluck. A lot. Yet he can't seem to express his feelings at all. But one night that all changes when a stallion tries to have his way with the flowery mare. Blake must take matters into his own hands if he is to save his best friend.
A Lament Hearts and Hooves Day Special
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nice story. it was quite rushed so i really couldn't get into it. favorite part was probably the second chapter and the asshole getting his ass kicked. i wont give it a like or dislike.
"If looks could kill, Carrot Top would’ve gone through Fluttershy’s shed."
Stay out of my shed!
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Interesring start, i suppose. All your Lament stories seem to rush the relationships, but i know that is just an illusion (somewhat). These peopke have been in equestria, living with these mares for months. The relationships have been building up for months prior to the story.
I like how you write.
I would like to see some female humans get dropped into equestria, now. You've got three or four men.
5626983 rushed? Yep i agree with what peacekeeper said.
Still the story is not without its charm and for that I'm leaving a like.
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I figured you guys would like that!
Hey Hey Hey stay out of my shed.
so cute!
I liked it. Simple, but effective and cute.
Oh mah gahd soe mUHch pashun!!!
Oh mah gahd almoast raypt ahnd sayvd bah ah hoomahn oh mah gahd dis iz soe kule!!!
Explain why, you put a sex tag in here?
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I thought it was pretty saucy so I decided to slap it on there
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lol nope
5709714 I'd rather have had a death curse put on me than hear you say that.
Seems a bit rushed to me, and I'm not particularly fond of the layout.
But other then that its a good start, nice job.
What does Fluttershy's shed have to do with this!? D=
Nice job 8'D
And a question... how does one Duck under a pony throwing a hoof? wouldn't he... I don't know... back pedal away from it?
IDK.
A good story, went by a bit fast but I still liked it.
Nice job.
Hey Hey Hey, Stay out of my shed OK?
Good story Man
I'll be honest, I wasn't impressed with this. Even taking into account their prior relationship this story feels very badly rushed. The emotional delivery was also very ham-handed and the fight dynamics just made no sense even if you assume Blake was completely clueless in a fight. When you throw in the numerous mechanical errors, the result is just bad so I am giving this a thumbs down in spite of the fact that it was cute as others have noted.
*slow claps* There should be more fics like this. I like the kind of "guy rescues girl" stories. That's why I come back every once in a while to re-read this.