• Published 15th Feb 2015
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Roses are Red, Violets are Blue - GrizzlytheMedic



Blake likes Roseluck. A lot. Yet he can't seem to express his feelings at all. But one night that all changes when a stallion tries to have his way with the flowery mare.

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Blooming Romance

Roseluck felt herself being placed on her bed by Blake, his strong arms began unwrapping themselves from around her body. She whined in protest as she felt her source of security leaving her.

“Blake?” She managed to choke out.

“Yeah Rosie?” Blake responded, sitting on the bed.

“You know before this whole thing went sideways, I was gonna ask you out. I really like you more than a friend at this point. I admit, I also heard your little pep talk to yourself in the shower too.” A faint smile made its way to her lips.

“Really?” Blake asked.

“Why would I lie?” Roseluck asked rhetorically.

“I dunno, to cover up you looking at my chest and butt the past few months.” Blake now wore a smirk of his own.

Roseluck gasped.

“I thought you never noticed!” She said.

“I may have a short attention span but I know when somepony is looking at me like eye candy.” Blake said.

“True enough. You want to make it official?” Roseluck looked up hopefully at Blake and stared into his chocolate brown eyes.

“Sure thing Rosie.” He whispered as he leaned in and closed his eyes. Roseluck was not experienced with stallions at all, this as a matter of fact was her first kiss, and she couldn’t think of a more perfect person to spend it on.

As their lips made contact, Roseluck pulled Blake in, making him flop on her left side, but their lips never broke apart.

Blake marveled at how soft her lips were and as he continued to kiss her. She tasted faintly of raspberry and he loved every bit of it as she moaned quietly into his mouth. The both of them felt a spark in their chests, as if this had been the plan from the start. Soon, the need for oxygen became too great to ignore and the pair broke apart.

“That was my first kiss.” Roseluck admitted.

“I can’t say that but this was the first time something felt undeniably right about it.” Blake said looking into Roseluck’s sparkling lime green pools.

“Same here” She giggled.

“Wanna go again?” Blake asked.

Roseluck hopped up onto her new coltfriend’s chest and brought her face close to his own/

“Absolutely.” She purred, closing her eyes and going in once again.

After another deep passion filled kiss, Blake pulled back and looked at Roseluck.

“Blake, would you spend the night with me? I’m still a bit rattled by the events at the bar and I feel safe around you.” Roseluck knew she was trying her luck when she asked him this.

“Give me a reason to say no.” Blake smiled.

“We’ve only been going out for around an hour now.” Blake retorted with a smirk,

“Shut up and get under the covers you big sexy dope!” Roseluck giggled, pulling the covers over herself as Blake quickly followed suit, disposing of his shirt.

“Let me get some gym shorts and I’ll be right back.” Blake said, dashing out of the room and returning less than 30 seconds later wearing his choice of pajamas. He scooted under the covers and held Roseluck close to him giving her an affectionate scratch behind the ear. She cooed and nuzzled her head into his muscular chest, which she was almost entirely responsible for.

“I love you Blake.” Roseluck whispered.

“I love you too Rosie.” Blake whispered back, planting a kiss on her forehead as she drifted off to a land of happy dreams of her and Blake that some ponies would find absolutely atrocious.

Author's Note:

I hope you enjoyed this little 3 part Hearts and Hooves Day special! :pinkiehappy:
Leave your feedback in the comments below and have a happy Hearts and Hooves Day!!:heart:

Comments ( 16 )

nice story. it was quite rushed so i really couldn't get into it. favorite part was probably the second chapter and the asshole getting his ass kicked. i wont give it a like or dislike.

5626983 rushed? Yep i agree with what peacekeeper said.

Still the story is not without its charm and for that I'm leaving a like.

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I figured you guys would like that! :rainbowlaugh:

I liked it. Simple, but effective and cute.

Explain why, you put a sex tag in here?

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I thought it was pretty saucy so I decided to slap it on there

5709714 I'd rather have had a death curse put on me than hear you say that.

A good story, went by a bit fast but I still liked it.
Nice job.

Hey Hey Hey, Stay out of my shed OK?

Good story Man :pinkiehappy:

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I'll be honest, I wasn't impressed with this. Even taking into account their prior relationship this story feels very badly rushed. The emotional delivery was also very ham-handed and the fight dynamics just made no sense even if you assume Blake was completely clueless in a fight. When you throw in the numerous mechanical errors, the result is just bad so I am giving this a thumbs down in spite of the fact that it was cute as others have noted.

*slow claps* There should be more fics like this. I like the kind of "guy rescues girl" stories. That's why I come back every once in a while to re-read this.

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