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Manaphy


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Vinyl Scratch and Octavia discuss the events which took place before Cranky's wedding. However, Vinyl is filled with anxiety once her more impulsive behavior is brought into question.


Thanks to Soaring, Thunderbolt Sentinel, Vengeful Spirit, and ChibiChabot for pre-reading.

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Comments ( 15 )

6097733 Yep. :twilightsheepish:
Anyway, thanks for your advice regarding this story. I appreciate it! :twilightsmile:

6097739 I appreciate the opportunity!:pinkiehappy:

This was cute! Thanks for letting me preread it!

6097820 You're welcome! :twilightsmile:

the ending was adorable. just simply adorable.

6098205 Yeah, it was fun writing that ending. Thanks for reading what I wrote. :pinkiesmile:

with all the ship fics written on these two, it's nice to read soething that doesn't lead to another romantic pairing, at least not so quickly.

any plans to have the duo perform together, perhaps in Canterlot?

6099840 I may write another story with these two in the future, as working on this one was fun. Anyway, thank you for reading the story. :twilightsmile:

Loved it as always, but I gotta comment...

Glancing to her right, Vinyl studied the clear lake encompassing much of the garden. Its bright blue surface flowed and ebbed, fishes leaping out of it and into the air as though they were shot out of a cannon.

First thing that came to my mind was beautiful, serene waters... ease of a calm lakeside park... and suddenly, fish catapulting out of the water followed by a tumultuous thunderclap. Making insane air. And distance.

Boom - byebye, fishy. :trollestia:

Sorry, couldn't help it. Seriously cute story!

6101103 Looks like I now have an image stuck in my head. :twilightsheepish:
Anyway, thanks for reading the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

You're really improving, Manaphy! I liked this one - it was touching. Your characterization was excellent.

6104605 Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you found this story enjoyable. :twilightsmile:

Octavia seems to keep an able hoof on Vinyl.

I'm almost scared as to what or where Vinyl would end up if she did have somepony like Tavi around to keep her on track.

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