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4934027 yesh
4934038 I enjoy this so much more than johnny cash's version
I really do
I just can't into JC's version
4934040 To each his own. I enjoy both equally myself; they're too different, in my opinion, to really compare to each other.
4934048 not for me
one I can listen to and enjoy
the other I can't
4934059 I'll only judge you a little bit for that.
4934068
You don't know how long I've been looking for a story like this...
4934400 Really? My prereader warned me that this story would probably not be very well received... thanks!
4934496 Yea. Dark stories like this are very scarce. This is very well written and it has a great plot.
Heh heh, plot...
Ahem...
Anyways, it really pleases me to find something dark and making sense. Great job!
4934496 yeah, it's rough looking to write dark stuff that isn't like a slasher flick. I posted a really rough portion of a dark story and got a fairly tepid response.
Good work on this. Definitely felt for a character I generally dislike.
4934400 I want to start a group of writers dedicated to the idea of bad things happening to ponies. I'll either name it Overcast Kids or the Guild of Calamitous Intent
4934027 Gotta say, I got some great footage of one of their recent shows:
4934967 That's not a bad idea but not a lot of people write stories like that, especially not good ones. It's so disappointing...
I'd totally join your group, though!
4934622 I'm very humbled. Thank you! Glad I could please a reader.
4934951 You felt for her? Then I guess my work here is done. Heh. Thanks for the compliment. I know it may seem strange, but little things like that mean worlds to us writers and artists in general.
4939789 Welcome!
Well, that was pretty deep. No pun intended. The things she does to herself over the thought of all she's lost and what she risks losing next, it's a pretty sad state she's in. It's true, Silver probably wouldn't understand. And the dangers of losing her if she not only found out about the cuts, but also WHY she cut herself, and the wanting to make Spoon more than just a friend could lead to her losing her even faster. OH THE DRAMA!
I wonder how Spoon would react to all that stuff crashing down on her. She wants the D. But would she settle for a Di instead? Who knows. Shame it's just one chapter. I would of loved to see what the next day held. What would happen if a wound ruptured due to somepony getting too rough with her, maybe AB or Scoots does something like shove her into something and freak out like hell when DT's leg starts bleeding like crazy. The trauma and guilt that would rush through their mind. SO MUCH POTENTIAL.
Great story. Bit of a tease. But pretty good. You're missing a couple words that end up turning things into a verb. I missed what sections those two were though. I was too into the story to pay much mind. XD
4947444 I'm so glad the (somewhat) famous Telaros commented on my story!
I tried to dig deep with this one, and I guess I succeeded.
In response to the rest of your comment, I never planned on going any further with the idea; it was originally just a writing exercise anyways. Perhaps if there is "popular demand," I may see what I could do with a sequel or two, but I wouldn't hold your breath.
Also: Having someone shove DT and unintentionally aggravate a wound is a BRILLIANT idea. I might steal it.
4950760 You forgot the "i" and the "n" in "famous".
Though, I guess that all depends on what side of the fence people end up when crossing paths with me.
Totally wasn't trying to put ideas into your head or anything. Or wrapped it in a box with a red ribbon around it for you as a gift or anything.
(Take them all! ALL!)
Well, it's okay. I prefer to be pleasantly surprised than use up so much energy anticipating that may never come to pass. This dealing with a bit of a dark but all too real and far more common topic that many would rather turn a blind eye to and call freaks, emos, and just overall having Diamond Tiara in it with MATURE and GORE is enough to drive most readers away.
Popular demand? Apparently you'd have to write a DT Sleeping in Your Bed story and include a lot of Fanta in it if you want 'popular' demand.
In any event, I really enjoyed how this went. You may not write many stories, but you have a nice touch for them.
Here's hoping to seeing more from you, be it more mature level tellings or fluffy pink bunny Tiara fics. Best of luck, and thanks for writing this. Just know that there are plenty of people, mostly lurkers as I used to be (still act like at times outside of DT stuff), but more people appreciate a good mature fic that does more with the tag than many others tend to bother with.
Cya!
This was well written. I'm not much for self inflicted pain, but you did a good job on this.
4956445 Why thank you! I know the subject matter isn't everyone's cup of tea; and I certainly hope I didn't come off as condoning that sort of behavior.
Wow! Amazing story! For a depressing fic, it was I incredibly well-written! Keep it up, hope to see more great work from you!
Thanks to the CMC, fate changed.