Princess Luna has begun an insurrection against Princess Celestia. Such an action will have consequences. With her small but loyal army gathered to face Celestia's might war machine, how will the battle play out in the minds of Luna's soldiers on the field?
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They are the Few, and they are the Proud. Their courage is unwavering, and their resolve unbreakable in the very face of Death, promising to take as many of their enemies to Hell alongside themselves. They stand as Brothers- and Sisters-in-Arms, standing with one another with unyielding loyalty to Home and Country, willing to lay down their own lives for each other without question. These Proud Few are the star of the Republic. They are the Lunar Marines.
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Good, but you need to prune out a few mistakes. I see "it" being used between "after" and "she", "a" being used in a couple of places where it doesn't belong, and a paragraph that's not indented and doesn't have a period at the end. There may be others.
4409049 Thanks for pointing those mistakes out. I'll get on it immediately.
4410285 You're quite welcome. It really is good even with them.
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