Diamond Tiara has an internal battle because of her mother. Can she hold it together? After all, a Diamond CAN'T break.
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And that last sentence...
I've been waiting long to read a good fimfiction on our `polished diamond`.
Imagine if Carol was involved...
"Just look at the flowers, Spoiled..."
BANG!
THIS WAS GREAT!
6515182 Thank you!
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Eeyup. 
6514824 Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I'll be reading this soon... but first: Looking at the title, I suppose you could say... Diamond (Tiara) is Unbreakable?
6519528 Well, she's trying to be.
6519615 Really? Thank you! Is there any advice you'd have on how to improve it?
6519706 Right, I remember something about starting a ew paragraph every time you switch between action and dialogue, but wouldn't that make most of my paragraphs too short? Is there another way?
As soon as I said that, I felt like Sunset andMidnight Sparkle.6520292 Okay.
Holy bucking shite. That was brutal...
6522896 Why, thank you? I think?
6523466 lol welcome XD
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the cmc need to know the truth more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we need a happy ending
Wow...
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She DOES eventually get her happy ending in the episode though. 
6539558 Good wow or bad?
6539575 to this au story my friend
6539577 More like abuse dressed up as deserved punishment...Good nonetheless
6539634 ...You want me to re-write my story?
Why..? 
6539737 That's what I was going for. That's why it's so dark. Diamond has been conditioned to think that her being abused is okay, and even good for her.
6540339 I never said that maybe another chapter diamond tiara can get the help that she needs because clearly she's getting abused enough that she could die I mean she got cuts that have almost bleed out she needs help I feel that this story needs a sequel maybe another chapter I do not know but I love your stories and I hope you keep writing
6540341 so sad....and i have to admit...This is well written and accurate....Well done sir
6541172 ...Maybe, but I intended this to just be a one shot. I'm not really sure what the story line would be for a sequel like that. If you wanted, though, you could always write a story. Just give it your own twist!
And thank you! 
6541435 Thank you.
And it's ma'am. 
6541493 i can not i do work that will not let me have time for it sadly and i do not want to leave a unfinished story so it just cannot be give us a small one chapter where we know diamond tiara at least get help please i know you can do it
6541497 oh....ok ma'am
6541514 ...Alright. You win.
I don't know how well I'll be able to write it, for it's not my specialty genre... But I'll try. I'll link it to your comment when I post the new story, okay? 
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6541640 one more thing alway believe in yourself story idea cmc find out about the abuse and get help for her they are called every day heros
6541778 Uhm... I think that'd be a bit much. I don't think Diamond would appreciate it if everypony knew she was being abused.
Very realistic portrayal of physical abuse. Now I feel sick..... This fanfic hit a bit too close to home for me.
Edit: Saw that it's your first fic. Well done, my fellow author. Well done.
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That comment..... More traumatizing stuff was not what I needed after this fic!
Fics like this make me hate Spoiled Rich all the more.
6564007 I'm sorry..
And thank you.
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Yeah... I hope you liked it though. 
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It's okay, it's not your fault. In fact, it's good that you wrote this. People need to have more awareness of such things.
6566745 I did like the story, I just can't stand Spoiled Rich.
I like this a lot. It is very dark and disturbing but gives reasoning for the monster that the show couldn't show. Heh heh. That the show couldn't show.
... I try too hard... 
Thanks for writing. 
6575243 *Nose hurts from facepalming my glasses onto the bridge of my nose really hard*
Thanks, Mr. Chill. You certainly ARE chill! :D ... :D ... 
