Applejack is about to find out that she needs to be more then a sister to Apple bloom.
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Matt11
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4960709 he's right
I knew there was something bothering me about that phrase, and I got caught up in thinking about the idea behind it, that I didn't notice the grammar. My fault.
4960724 um its alright so far its one dislike
points for trying
Apple Bloom takes the Ice Bucket Challenge like a boss.
4960932 thx this was my 1st time trying something other then Scootalo
4960628 I made somepony cry.......
that makes me kinda happy goal completed
A very nice one-shot. Very emotional.
And Diamond Tiara, using Apple Bloom's dead parents to get under her skin? That's low, even for you.
4962621 at lest DT got what she deserved, and glad ya liked it I'm thanking about doing a sequel one day, but its a big possabilty
Wow DT that was low even by your standards, you got what you deserved
4962741 Indeed. You're lucky Apple Bloom didn't beat you senseless.
I like! It's always good to shift up your characters now and again.
"Daddy, tell me how much you love me again!"
Right there my stomach started burning. And mocking Applebloom for her dead parents??? Glad she got decked. I think it's time for some CUPCAKES 
Been busy with stuff, but I'll get around to fixing this up soon. I'm getting close to finishing my new story, so I'll have more free time soon. I saw you faved it. Are you enjoying it so far?
4963510 yeah I'm enjoying it
I know this isn't the story for joke, but I feel as if there was a reference to the ice bucket challenge when granny smith came to wake up applebloom.
Oh my Celestia......the feels......the feels..........
It was good to see diamond tiara get her comeuppance. That was nice.
I had tears streaming down my face reading this.
Also, i can relate to apple bloom. I've been there before. Not a nice road to go down, but one you need to go down anyway.
4963510
Diamond Tiara may have crossed a line, but even someone as terrible as her doesn't deserve to die. She deserves to live, if only so she can see the error of her ways.
4964506 Hey, don't get me wrong. I have a story where that happens. Where she discovers that she's so mean to Apple Bloom out of jealously for the tight knit family she has, and eventually the two of them become friends.
This DT however, did deserve something horrible for making fun of the dead.
4964384 glad you like and sorry to hear something like this happened to you
4964811 Something horrible, other than death. At least in my book.
>mfw this
4966461 whats mfw mean?
4966745
It means "my face when." It is used either with or without a picture to indicate a reaction to an event.
4966757 oh...thx for telling me that
Cry I freaken sobed so sad
Well part of this is adds to the justification of an ending to a fic I have got in the works and detracts from another which I don't want to follow through with but can't shake out of my head, unfortunately coursework keeps me tight scheduled at the moment
I am surprised neither AJ or Cheerilee asked why Apple Bloom hit Diamond, then again Cheerilee has always been the oblivious and overall bad (in terms of dealing with students issues and bullying) teacher and with work and the anniversary of her parents' deaths, AJ would have other things on her mind.
Overall an interesting and unique fic as I have to read another with the whole AJ being a mother-figure being so direct, then again I do tend to keep to Scootaloo and/or RD stories....
Did you say you were working on a sequel to this?
5068599 yes a sequel which will deal on AJ being like a mother/dealing with AB's bully issue
"I don't know what she said to you, but you had no right to do that."
Actually yes she did, Diamond Tiara was ruining her life, so she had every right to beat the s**t outta her!!!!
5165594 As the old saying goes "Two wrongs don't make a right."
Granted, I don't always agree with that, because sometimes people won't see sense, until they realize that there are consequences for their actions. And if it means they need someone who they've angered to hurt them physically to make them stop, then that's how it is.
Sister or Mother the important thing is that you have a family to lean on in times of distress
Sweet fic, but this is bugging me:
Granny's memory was bad so she pulled out of a notebook "and"read what it said.
I could be wrong but I'm not sure you meant to put quotes there.
Otherwise, it was incredibly sweet, and as every one of your stories I've read, I was smiling ear-to-ear by the end
5246107 Well spoken sir!
ACK, I'M BECOMING BLIND!! What, those are tears? No, they're not. There's just some onions... *rubs eyes* But this was a beautiful story. Even got me crying,
I've seen a few mistakes, but it was still aweosme. Now I have to add this to my Hurt / Comfort group. 
It'z a great story.
NOW THAT IS JUST PLAIN SELFFISH AND A HORRIBLE FATHER THING TO DO!!!
HOLY MOLY!!!!
I'll admit, that was very low for diamond tiara, I feel bad for apple bloom