• Member Since 10th Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen 3 hours ago

Matt11


I'm a recently returned writer and plan to release alot of stories again.

T

this contains diapers and age regression.

"Family." It's a word Discord hasn't had much use for or even thought about. Yet now it won't leave him alone.

The spirit comes to realize that he wants a family, to have children all his own to raise and care for. The only problem is, he doesn't have anyone he can start a family with and he's too embarrassed to ask.

So he decides on a risky decision, he'll use his friends and regress them into foals, caring for them for forty eight hours until the spell he casts on them returns them to normal.

But Discord has never dealt with foals before, and it isn't long before the regression of his friends starts to have unintended consequences? Will the spirit be able to keep the foals in line, or is he powerless to stop their antics?

{This Is a collab with me and SuperpinkBrony12 }

Editor: SuperpinkBrony12

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 51 )

This realm contains many horrors not safe for foals and letting them be exposed to them would be a big no no.

What’s should happen if the reage mane six are expected to chaos magic?

The CMC will still appear in this later on. You'll know when it gets to that point. :raritywink:

OMG I WANT MORE!!!! SO......MUCH.....CUTENESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I bet Rainbow Dash is next!

Hehe. This is quite cute, fun, and very whimsical. Flutters is certainly the perfect 'first choice' and I'm glad to see the pacing you are doing with this work. It's moving along super-duper well.

I wonder if Dashie will be next...?

This story is so cool Have a follow

And promotly after this, they turn Discord back into a statue permenently, the way they should have.

9334781 Oh don't worry, he'll learn his lesson in due time. Trust me. :pinkiecrazy:

Dashie is lucky she didn't get a longer time out. (Or get flushed)

9336265 Or a spanking for that matter.

Very joivial. I really enjoyed the conversations between Dashie, Rarity, and Flutters. They were certainly fun to mentally visualize and hear as they went on.

Another great moment was the exchange between Discord and Rarity. I had wondered if he would just do whatever he wanted despite Rarity's resistance. However it panned out quite nicely. Fluttershy has certainly done wonders for him in being more respectful to others.

I can't wait until Discord gets to Pinkie Pie!

9344426
She would enjoy being in the body of a foal again.

9352028 You'll see when her chapter comes up. That's all I can say.

You would think Discord would be proud of all that chaos.

9355017 As a fellow agent of chaos, he's proud beyond words. But he's trying to be a parent. And no parent is gonna be happy that their kids snuck out of bed and trashed the house.

9355052
Agreed though if I were him the baby monoter would be there first, poor frammed flutters

This chapter is totally AWESOME! Very easy to imagine and it was a total delight to see Applejack as the instigator. I wouldn't doubt for a moment how she'd be more than willing to take full advantage of what Discord was offering by being as rough and rowdy as possible.

The whole idea of the lounge chair being like a bucking wild stallion was great! That scene was truly wonderful to take in.

And now we have a forthcoming surprise of who Discord put in charge of the farm... Chaos is definitely likely in more places than his dimension.

9356971 He's new at foals and he counted on Fluttershy being able to reign them in. With more experience, he would've thought to set up the monitor first.

9357232
Ok ya but I think that flutters shoud not have also gotten in trouble, There is only so much she can reign in as 1 against 3.

“Make mine with strawberries,” Applejack spoke up, prompting everypony to look at her. “What? After learnin’ my mom was a Pear, I’ve started to realize that other fruits have their uses too. And Granny always said I’d eat anythin’ as a foal.”

Always did kind a roll my eyes at the haha applejack only eats apples, joke. It gets kind of old really fast

9366989 Seems to have been reinforced after "The Washouts" and "Honest Apple".

It sounds like spankies are coming!

The progression of Discord becoming overwhelmed is perfect! This story truly has built to a moral on taking off more than you can chew. Moreover on how foal sitting is hard enough with one foal. By adding more all he got was more of the chaos he didn't construct by his own whim.

I wonder if Discord would ever think on whether-or-not a foal may be better cut out as a true spirit of chaos? It would be simply insane if he were to mentally regress himself. This could create a situation of 'Ultra Chaos'. His chaos is at least controlled while that of a baby is, well, not.

Great pacing and loads of fun. Pity Discord never figured on Pinkie Pie turning on him. <LoL!>

Now I know a spanking is coming.

9374227 To quote Chuckie from Rugrats "Uh-oh! I smell trouble!"

9374862
I also liked the Fantasia reference.

Ooh! Double trouble for Discord as his desperation allowed for not just Twilight to enter but Starlight, too. I'm sure having the seven together will make Discord's chaos seem like a scripted play. <LoL!>

Nice lead-in for Starlight. Now this leaves the question of where Spike is...? Did he hurry off to contact Celestia? Or could he be somewhere in Discord's Dimension, too?

Did you know that S.O.S does not actually stand for anything?

This chapter did well in progressing the story to the finale. Knowing the next is the last really gives additional appreciation for what you did here.

Points for acknowledging Aunt Holiday. I know the fandom is split on how they feel about Scoots' Aunts but I'd rather her have some pony than no pony. If she was to be an orphan than having no sign of anyone trying to help her have a family by this point in the show would be awful. :(

I like how you pointed out how Spike is able to control his 'Mail Box Magic'. Knowing he can focus to send to someone outside of Princess Celestia is good and, honestly, possible given how long he's probably been using such magic.

It's fun imagining Maud in this situation. Seeing her in a day care setting is hilarious! Her calm voice and slow movement amidst the loud sounds and quick movements of the foals is certainly going to be great.

Thanks for a great story! It's been a great time to follow.

a very nice fic, i can't wait for the next (and final) chapter! it's great :D

I was hoping for something else to happen to those foals.

9400388
Liked what happen if all 7 girls decide to go outside of discord house and get exposed to chaos energy.

Nice conclusion to a super fun story. It did exactly what it needed to do to wrap everything up in a fashion in which, in my opinion, the show would do as well.

My favorite parts of the conclusion were Scoots' and Dash's battle to dress-up. Dash sounded very much in character.

Another great part was the jealousy of each foal over how Flutters got to be held instead of strapped into a high chair.

You really did well in balancing out all the characters you added to the story. You also made great references to scoots' Aunts and even to her never-before-seen mom.

I wonder if Season 9 will FINALLY let us see some family for Scoot to go home to?

Congested for escaping thr downvote trolls. Alls nice ending was cute as usual.

Congested for escaping thr downvote trolls. Alls nice ending was cute as usual.

very good start, ah I still enjoy the god of chaos and disharmony, even if he's a good guy now, he still cracks me up

fluttercord but fluttershy is a foal, and discord is the daddy

oh Dashie, you little troublemaker tsk tch

I bet, Pinkie pie, is going to cause a heap of trouble for Discord, not like the others have, but I myself am enjoying this story

nooooooooo the story will end oh the horror oh the horror! *faints*

Login or register to comment