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Hopefullygoodgrammar


"I'm Off!" said the Madman!!

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Love it keep up the good work! XD

Why the hell does this have 4 dislikes already? It's a great premise, and I'd love to see more.

I kinda miss Regenerator 228, though.

Your prose is great, it crafts the grim, lower-city setting perfectly. Also, I'm getting a very strong Lovecraftian vibe from this. Awesome.

When u said he controls electricity, I instantly called him Cole MacGrath.

When I first read this story: Holy crap we're going hard, strap in.

4980468 I think his Hercules review is his best, either that or his Takashi's Challenge.

Comment posted by Zero3451 deleted Sep 10th, 2014
Comment posted by Zero3451 deleted Sep 10th, 2014

4980560 My favorites were his Japanese shooters review and his Titenic review.

4980630 Oh yeah! Those were good, too :twilightsmile:

I'm also in the middle of writing the next chapter.

4980673 Cool now we will see what happened to this poor insane individual. :duck:

love it :3 its rare for me to find something that i really cant wait to get uptdated :pinkiehappy:

4990438 Thank you very much :pinkiehappy: I hope to get the next chapter up in a few days

:ajbemused:rats, drinking blood.:ajsleepy: you are a sick and twisted author.

:pinkiesad2:It's beautiful.

:ajsleepy:you would say that.

:pinkiecrazy:YEP!

4996158 :rainbowlaugh: Thanks for that...I guess, here, have a really good song that has nothing to do with the story, but is awesome regardless.

4996615 Youre welcome sir!

:pinkiecrazy::More of the rats! Have them eat limbs!

No! Just no pinkie.

:pinkiecrazy::My name is pinkamina. gonna eat you now.

sorry 4th wall only pinkie can break it and she won't kill me!

:pinkiecrazy::Damn it.

I live to see another day!

upppps nvm wrong story to comment dont worry still good :3 (need to really fix chrome )

4996615 You listen to Blind Guardian?

I'd upvote again if I could.

5000127 Calm yourself, I only like that one song....because it's AWESOME!!!!!

Holy shit this is goooood~~~~

5005074 Thank you, thank you very much (There's no pompadour emoticon but just imagine one.)

The Elements aren't a weapon, they are a form of healing, but sometime force a healing will never make things better, they can never reform a being, the only way to reform is to do it the old fashion way and that is time, patience, and love. Not through a rainbow blast.

5012683 That's the point of this story :twilightsmile: Or....at least part of it.

It is obvious that the ponies is his only hope of getting his insanity back, as they are the cause of all that he hated on earth.
However, I think that if they want to succeed in reforming him, they'll have to move him to another country with creatures that he hates less. Like the zebras (because zebras are cool,) or the Minotaurs due to their relative similarity.

5012736 Sad to say this, but this is a pony fic, I am awful at world-building and I don't really have an interest in it either, sorry :fluttershysad:

5012749 Let's say that you were in to and good at world building. Would you agree with my guess?

5012692 well lets see how long till he goes insane

5012760 Not really, this isn't one of those stories, but I hope that that doesn't deter you from reading this.

ooohhhhhh yeeeeeeesss

5015170 that, is for you to decide and figure out the meaning of.

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story? Will Twilight be badass in this story? Is this an Evil Celestia story? is this a Luna's a Prick story?

Short chapters are short.:derpytongue2:

5032824 what? Is it time for a face off? Cause' no pony/one has ever beat me innone of those.:ajbemused:

To be honest, you're going a little fast. The story is called "crippled, beaten and broken". I get that the elements purged him of his insanity, but he's still been living in a sewer for a year, and he's still as skeletal as a pile of sticks. He seems a little too..... normal. He's just sad, not really damaged or empty. If anything, the story functioned a lot better while he was insane. I kinda miss fucked-up Ryan.

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