The window through which we perceive life is what defines our experience of it. We are only aware of a small fraction of what our senses pick up. We can all choose how we see the world.
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Scientists test out their hypotheses when conducting experiments, to get a better understanding on what they do. Twilight tests out a time traveling spell that allows her to go back in time to any period that she chooses, but something goes awry then she is sent to the past where she meets familiar faces and the ponies who are well known throughout history. But, the world that they live in is not what she expected.
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I like the concept of the story and how you wrote it out. Great job! Keep the chapters comin!
Very interesting start!
I noticed that in the 2nd quote you repeated the sentence 'Instructions are listed on the bottom' twice.
When Luna says “Time for me to sleep, the sun has made its presence once again.”, perhaps that could be slightly altered to read “Time for me to sleep, the sun has made its presence known once again.”?
Lastly, that whole part about Trixie jumping in/out of a glass window had me wondering what was going on.
'turned her attention to a glass window near the door.' and 'Trixie was left speechless and jumped through the window, the glass broke upon impact.'. Was it magic?!
I would love to help out with proof reading, if you need it.
This. I like this. Now: GIVE MORE LITTLE SIS!
4853829 You know what, I'll take you on your offer.
I'll be adding the changes now.
You can send me a PM or we can discuss this on my user page, if you want to proof read for the story. That's if you have the time.
4854292 I shall give you more.
4853703 I will, can't let a story like this be wasted.
Tsk Tsk, slave. Awesome chapter, and mares dressed in latex suits? Well...
(Don't ever let Monique see that...)
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4857384 She won't, it's not like she watches your every move and checks your internet history.
4857387 Yeah, 'cause I don't have this kind of crazy girlfriend. Well, thank God for that...
)
*reading Yuri clop with a happy face* "Oh well, that was just... Wow! Let me go to Derpibooru now... Hehe..." *she's right behind me, right?*
(just joking around, she's just like a Pinkie Pie in real life
4857407 Well, have fun there.
4858148 Yeah, sorry.
Mmmmmmm... I like this Trixie and Twilight interaction... Hehe... Sorry lil' sis, I just ship it!
Also: Who is the silhouette? Well, let AJ say that:
4861994 Ship it if you may, I'm glad that you love the interactions. I had to keep them natural.
4859779 It's fine...
4862233 Oh, don't be sad. I apologize.
Looking good so far buddy, I'll take a look at the other two chapters now.
I believe the word you're looking for here is "constellation", not "consolation".
Not gonna lie, but I laughed pretty hard at that line.
4865431 I'll be sure to fix that right away, I'm glad that you loved the first two chapters so far.
I had to make sure that every detail in this story was to the point.
4865530 Suspension of disbelief!
Nice ending, loved the story.
4868372 Thanks, Sci!
Sorry that it had to end though.
Dat final! I love this Troll Trixie in the final. I can only imagine you writing a Twixie Fanfic... Hehe, you know, I not asking nothing... I swear!
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I really love it sister, keep with this work!
4870210 Sadly, romance is not my strong point, so maybe I might try it. Thank you, big sis!
If Princess Platinum, Starswirl the Bearded, and Clover the Clever were voiced, what would they sound like?
5220242 Beats me.