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TwiwnB


30 years old closet brony from the center of Europe. Just happily doing my thing in my corner of the internet.

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Rarity meets a very good painter and asks him to make a painting of her. The result just differs a lot from her expectation and Rarity is launched on a quest to find out just how beautiful she really is, isn't, or can be...

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Interesting concept... a touch of Dorian Gray with much more hopeful ending. :raritywink:

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Thanks :twilightblush:. I had to make a quick google search to understand the comparison, but... wow! That book seems amazing. Cruel, violent and depressing, but still amazing.

"Fat? She said fat?" Spike crossed his arms & buffed out a little green smoke" He waddled to the pair waiting at the diner.
"hey paint boy what cha doin messin with the Dragons tail?" Spike had plans of his own about a hot time out.:raritydespair:

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Being a dragon sure has some advantages :moustache:. But...
"Spike!" said Twilight's voice in his back. "You better not be doing what I think you're doing."
...being the assistant of an overpowered alicorn princess tends to make things a little more complicated.

More seriously, I admit I chose the easy way not to put Spike into the story at all. It would have been funny having him intervene at each steps (once with Twilight, once with Applejack, and once just before Pinkie Pie), but it would have also made the whole writing way much more difficult to handle and long to prepare...
Still, it would be "sort of easy" to add him, thinking about it now. I mean, not like it would change the overall story (it would just add a comedic element).

Never be afraid to travel the road paved in rough stones. Good idea working with her vanity,:raritydespair:

Twi saw spike & Rarity enter the cafe' "Spike what happened? You walk into a door again?":facehoof:
As Spike gave her boss a puzzled look, Rarity blushed " Oh Dear, , ,":raritywink:
Twi started bouncing around like a wikd rubber ball "YES. .YES. .YES . .YES. . .":twilightsheepish:

Spike still the clueless one looks at Rarity " What got into her???":moustache:

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Never be afraid to travel the road paved in rough stones.

As long as it leads somehwere I have any interest going to... :scootangel:

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Well, we are still a long, long way from Equestr... Hum, I meant: journey is on!

NO NOT THE PAINTING!!!!!!!!!!

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