30 years old closet brony from the center of Europe. Just happily doing my thing in my corner of the internet.
Twilight Sparkle is the princess of friendship. More than anypony else, she knows she cannot do anything without her friends. She also knows you are supposed to know a little bit about your friends to have the right to call them your friends.
So when she realizes she knows about nothing about her friends and especially Rarity, the regal alicorn freaks out.
This isn't a comedy, this isn't an adventure: it's simply skimming over a part of the concept of friendship.
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Keeping this short as I'm writing on my phone, which is barely able to view fimfic as is, but;
This was good. The pace felt almost episode-like, as did the setting.
And while you say it isn't a comedy per se, you had me chuckling at the absurdity of it all. That's Twilight, alright.
So, given good characterization, an enjoyable setting and a good conclusion:
Have a thumb and fav'!
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So Twilight can you keep a secret?
Sure Spike
FOREVER!
It's Ruby White
Named after a Hoofball player
Oh my oh my.
Twilight, you truly call yourself a good friend?
How disappointing you are.
This is Lesson Zero and Amending Fences all over again. Oh Twilight, will you never learn?
Twilight Sparkle!
Haven’t you learned anything about friendship?
And that's a letter to Celestia.
And that's a wrap!
I must say I enjoyed this story. It was well-written, the characterization was good, and everything resolved itself nicely.
Have a like, and a fave. Please don’t thank me. I don't like it when people do that, but I'm not banning anyone either. Thanks.
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Thanks
. To be honest, I'm not sure I understand, because I feel I've taken the "easy way" and I'm being rewarded for it, but at least you could enjoy the story, which is way more than I expected.
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I quickly went to read "Her day" and "Rarity's egg", but I guess it wasn't in those you named the child. I thought "Rarity's egg" would be it, but the twist obviously proved me wrong.
And the story also took away one element I wanted to exploit but didn't know how. But both were fun to read ^^.
The point is: I actually don't know anything whatsoever about football/hoofball, so I don't get the reference.
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Yes, it is,
I kind of miss those... and I wouldn't miss a chance to write "dear princess Celestia".
Then I'll just say that I'm grateful you took the time to let me know your thoughts about the story. And also that I'm glad you could find the story enjoyable as I'm always afraid to have created something that people would hate.
6421054 I have no real names yet. Seen a lot of nice names on other stories even gave away Cosmaline as a name for someones OC.
Hoofball ? It was spoke about "Hoofball cards hoofball stats "
and Raritys dad Hondo Flanks has hoofball cuitemarks. other than that I have no clue either.
Coaline is a character in Marked but I wonder being half pony+ (Pongon) or half dragon+ (Dracony) will ever come up in the show. . .
Discord?
Happy you liked the tales of the white one and her drake,
Oh the hazards of Sparity. . .
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Maybe? I don't know, I'm not certain what you mean with "easy way". But for what I mean; the story felt "light", like the series are. Twilight's
near-breakdown wasn't heavy nor dark, but rather comedic and entertaining. Additionally the focus was almost like an episode - showing everything needed in an efficient manner, with no unnecessary details, but also with little-to-nothing feeling lacking. On top of that, Spike's mannerisms, as well as Rarity's, fell well within their characters.Does that make sense? 'cuz I'm not sure. Point being; I can't say that this story and/or scenario couldn't have been an actual episode, or at least close to one, I guess.
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I... had forgotten about that. And now, it is logical for her to like hoofball.
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Well, I mean that the story lacks in complexity. I only discuss one aspect of the theme, giving a very simplistic, and arbitrary moral without exploring the other side of the coin. I could only make a quick reference at the end:
So in terms of exploring the theme of the story, I've only gone half the way. Even worst, I knew it when I began writing, but I wanted to write so badly I couldn't wait until the idea had matured more in my head...
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I sometimes think Twilight needs to spend less time in her castle and more time in therapy. She's obviously got some problems, perhaps an undiagnosed disorder.
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agreed, yet it sounds like Twilight