Twilestia fanfiction!
Celestia is more than a millenium old, and with that comes much sadness and regret. Ponies are ever-transient in her life, and she hasn't had a real friend until Twilight Sparkle came along. Therein lies the crux of the matter: Celestia has always loved her faithful student, in one manner or another, but, recently, it's become markedly more . . . ehem, non-platonic. Little does she know, Twilight feels the same about her! But Celestia's extreme depression might ruin any chance for her to find happiness. Meanwhile, Luna is as devious and plotting as ever, ready with silly antics determined to push the two princesses into each other's arms!
Will true love rule the day just as true, true friendship? Or will depression suck the life right out of old cakebutt? Or will Luna's mischievous schemes prove to be just the push that's needed? Or will Twilight herself save the day once again?
Nopony knows just yet!!
This was partially inspired by this rant: Twilestia Akin to Pedophilia?!
Interesting start.
Hm, interested. More Twilestia is always nice, and this is not bad at all. However...
It seems the horrible curse of google docs has struck again, eating large parts of your story.
Argh! I haven't touched the actual story yet, but the phrase, "will depression suck the life right out of old cakebutt" in the description made me shudder muchly. Life should not be sucked out of butts.
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Nothing should be sucked out of butts, let's be honest.
(I'm sure someone will disagree with that ...)
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Oof! Thank you for pointing that out!! I will fix it as soon as possible. xD
I always enjoy a well written Twilestia story so this for a first chapter is getting high marks. I wonder though how much you'll go with the "Im old" cliche' that is so rampant in these stories.
I look forward to when the missing portions are added in. :D
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I hate that curse. Had it happen to something on each chapter I uploaded. Caught it before posting the chapters, but it was annoying.
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Okay! Everything is fixed, now. Sorry about that; I had no idea that Google Docs was so finicky! I was actually trying to make sure I got everything exactly right. Live and learn, I suppose, and thank you all for your help in learning this lesson!
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Wow, thank you! I really appreciate that, you made my whole day! As for the "I'm old" cliché, while I realize that it's thrown around a lot, I do intend for it to make a large impact on my story, though hopefully with more depth and meaning behind it than what I've read so far. I hope that's not a dealbreaker, and I'll try to keep your words in mind and use it sparingly, when it will make the biggest impact.
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Speaking as a mare with a large posterior and a small figure otherwise, I agree completely. Big butts are the sexiest, and anyone that disagrees probably has some issues!
Interesting. I dont read much stuff with Zombies so I look forward to what unfolds
What the hell. Sudden edgy alicorn OC ex machina.
And a kiss out of nowhere.
Here I thought this story would have a focus on building the Twilestia romance, but you're jumping the shark.
Looks like I was an inspiration.
Well. That was a somewhat unexpected development.
Kissing in the second chapter, eh? Sure, seems legit.
We demand more! (on an unrelated note we need a luna face.) Normally I'm not a fan of Twilestia but this is excellent! keep it up!
Luna has no room to talk. Theres a reason her nickname is moon butt, and its not her talent.
The description of this story is really good and funny.
That was unexpected. Well done!