The royal couple, Celestia and Twilight, have known each other for a very long time, ever since Twilight was a filly. Now here they are, in a committed relationship and Twilight is now pregnant.
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i like it and Aqua the Dragon of Skies is they going to be more chapters for this story
6198832 It was a one shot story. I can write another fic of Twilestia and make it longer
6198857 ok and please make a another story that has a lot of chapters with the two Princesses raising they colt together with Slice of Life stuff tag in it
6198857 also since this is a one-shot mark this one complete
6198864 Don't worry I will when the idea comes to me
6198908 okay
Hmm, I saw a lot of errors, and it could have been a bit longer. Otherwise, good story!
Ok, so I saw this story and thought, "Celestia got Twilight pregnant. This is stupid." Then I read it, and honestly it's not the best, but it's ok. It's nice to know whoever approves these stories has standards. You don't really see any shit stories on this site without specificly looking for them.
6199584 Anything you think I can improve on to make future stories better?
... (I dont think thats how that works) ... (just sayin', maybe some magic was involved; I havent read it yet, so I wont judge.) ...
Meh. Need to go to sleep and don't really have the time to say anything other than that I can't tell what tense this is supposed to be written in.
6199658 Rated E so no clop. Twilight is already pregnant in this story
6199854 It isn't written in any specific tense.
Showing premise, though it'd do you some good to re-read your work before you submit it. That way you could correct a good portion of the mistakes in it. But it's okay, I'll watch you, you might improve to a pretty good author. Besides, all writers (Me included) had to start somewhere.
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Though if you look at the rules of the site, there's plenty of room for pieces of crap to float around. I feel sorry for the mod's that have to read and pass some of those through.
did they forget they can teleport
6200431 read my earliest fic on here and compare it to this one or my other one. My Oldest fic is I am Princess Luna of the night. Compare that to The Misunderstood Pegasus or this one.
6200551 State of panic people forget things
6199608 I think it's all just a matter of finding what inspires you and what makes you most comfortable writing. I used to write short stories by typing them up on the computer, and they would always come out just terrible. I got a lot better once I started writing by hand. Just do you, you know?
6201655 Yeah i understand
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Witch one? But good story none the less.
6229957 He looks like both, but mainly Celestia
Good story here. How exactly did Twily get pregnant? Did Tia cast a spell to shoot sperm out of her horn or what?
You'd think they'd have medical staff on-hoof, this being the castle of the current ruler(s)...
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I don't think you want to know... But if you do, google "futa". Let it not be said I did not warn you, however.
As an unrelated and completely random aside, I do sell brain bleach by the gallon.