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lunabrony


I write stories.

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This story is a sequel to Goodnight Woon


Sequel to Goodnight Woon.

Ponies always want different things, but oftentimes, getting what they want is harder than it looks... if they manage to get it at all. Some may beg, some may plot, some may ask nicely, all will be explored.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

Your title is not spelled correctly bro

It's " pony " or ponies

I, for one, like the title as-is.

Ha.

Is this really complete? It seems unfinished. It was an interesting concept, nonetheless. It does deserve a favorite and a like.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

4996422 I believe it is supposed to mirror If You Give A Mouse A Cookie.

4996422 Pone is a popular internet spelling of the word 'pony' and I like it, it's an underused variant and gives a unique edge.

4996449 And no, it's not complete! I must've missed that!

We love your stories. Some events are almost exact to our filly days. you have earned my follow.

This was adorable. What next?

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...maybe "If You Give a Pie Caffeine"? Filly Pinkie sneaks some of her Daddy's coffee?

5007904 Pinkie on Espresso... I think crossing the streams would be safer.

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Would be fun to watch.

Hmm...

"If you give an Apple Oranges"

Applejack's first time trying oranges with her Aunt and Uncle.

The next youngest, her older brother Treble Cleft, was currently the bane of her existence, who annoyed her night and day practicing with his band.

I think you mean "clef" unless it is a pun on the condition of his chin.

"Yes we do! We're playing for one of mom's friends' daughter's bar mitzvah," he said.

Either this is an extremely liberal Jewish pony family or you mean "bat mitzvah."

Cute. Have you read Neigh Anything? The Friendship is Magic comic arc for Cadance's and Shining Armor's back story? It gives a cute quick glimpse of how Vinyl got her cutie mark.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

if you give a pinkie cake............

If you give a filly diamonds...

Trying to sell history books to Celestia of all ponies? Gutsy, stupid but gutsy.

Moral of the story: if you do not want to be solicited, have your underlings open the door for you. Otherwise you are just asking for trouble.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

Aw, only three mini-stories in this fanfic? Oh well. I loved the stories, anyway. My most favorite one was the first one with Celestia wanting pancakes with blueberries on top.

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