When Fluttershy stumbles across a small pink pup, she takes him home. Unfortunately, this only invites strange and spooky things to begin happening in Ponyville...
Link to credit the image source of which I claim no ownership or participation: http://icebreak23.deviantart.com/art/Fluttershy-The-Cowardly-Pony-273909700
instant love. drawn in!
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This is going to be interesting.
Oddly enough, I can't stand the show "Courage the Cowardly Dog", but I've yet to not love his appearance in crossovers. Is that strange?
Hmmm, interesting. I'll watch this.
"Sound."
Sorry to put an entire paragraph here, but you have two characters worth of dialogue in this one paragraph.
I never really watched Courage the Cowardly Dog, but I did like the few episodes I did see. I am interested in seeing where you take this, and will like and favorite to find out.
~KBO.
When you said you had a story in the works featuring a nostalgic crossover in your blog, I had absolutely no idea what to expect.
I am most pleasantly surprised!
This is a good crossover i had been a fan of Courage the Cowardly Dog shows this will have a chance of being funny.
5484417 You love Courage as a character, but the show itself gave you some sort of childhood trauma perhaps? It did that to me...
5484540 I always get warm fuzzies when someone says they actually read the blog :D
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No trauma (I didn't see it until I was much older). I just couldn't stand it.
And actually, I find Courage gets to shine as a character in crossovers far more than he did in the show.
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Just because I don't always comment on blogs doesn't mean I'm not unhealthily obsessed with checking my feed...
Awesome!
5484417 I know afew series/franchises that I have the same strangeness factor in the fact I can't stand them or at the very least indifferent to them yet like the appearance of them in fanfiction most of the time crossovers at that. So to me the fact you have a similar case isn't strange to me.
good one XD
A crossover between Courage the Cowardly Dog and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic?! Added to my read later list. I love Courage!
"Donkey Xote"
"Don Quixote"
That's rather clever of you.
5486318 i have occasionally been known for cleverness
This looks promising.
Uh oh...
not good at all
Coming from Fluttershy, that is real character growth.
Extra space.
Wow. It is like they are in the Middle of Nowhere.
As long as it is not a pony, or a griffon, or a dragon, or a minotaur, I am sure Fluttershy can handle it.
~KBO.
This can't be good.
I'm usually creeped out fairly easily, but not when it comes to Courage the Cowardly Dog. I'm weird. That's quite the silly video, however.
Slight errors I noticed:
The highlighted word should instead be - her
Pretty sure you meant - path
5504310 Fixed! Be careful, Neko has my #1 editor spot and he might fight you for it :p
Well, that was quite fun. And Pinkie's the only one other than Shy and Courage not controlled by the fog?
5504484 That will be addressed
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Don't worry, Neko (whoever you are)! I'm not out to take over anyone's editor spot... Plzdon'tfightme.
Hmm...wonder what's going to happen next.
5504527 5504441 I have no intention of fighting. But I cannot let my honor be besmirched.
Extra spaces.
"Pegasi" is plural. You may want "pegasus'." Also, "hooves."
"Candlelit" is one word.
Extra space.
Extra space.
What the hell does "spoopy" mean?
Is it weird I imagined Pinkie as Batman?
~KBO.
When did Eustace become a pirate? If he is not a pirate, or Irish, "me" a should be "my."
Two tenses here. This should be "brushed."
1.) You seem to be missing a word here.
2.) Missing comma.
Apparently, Eustace has always been an Irish pirate. You would not have made the same mistake twice in a row. I would like to think. So I will not point out the other ones.
I am not a good person.
Damn, Pinkie is so fracking Batman, right now. I look forward to more.
~KBO.
5513938 That's just how Eustace talks occasionally, and it kinda works
5513846 Halloween and skeletons and this story are spoopy
5514039 Oh, so it is like cute scary.
5514185 EXACTLY
Wait...you mean the others are lost? Permanently?
...this story just took a major turn into Dark, possibly into Tragedy.
5528628 Theyr not DEAD, but Courage stories rarely end peacefully
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The implication that they're permanently lost is what I was responding to.
Now, if that's something that can be fixed by the end of the story, then it's just dark.
5528940 I know what will happen, I just ask your trust and patience. I think you'll be satisfied.
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If you promise the story won't require adding a Tragedy tag at any point, that will be enough for me.
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It will not require tragedy, and I'll add that note to the chapter
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Good enough for me.
I was about to ask why Pinkie said "your friends" instead of "our friends."
Then I read some more, and my question was promptly answered.
This explains why Pinkie was so Batman last chapter. She is a random nameless changeling. Do not scroll over that unless you have already read chapter five.
~KBO.
A crossover of Courage? From Courage the Cowardly Dog Show Starring Courage?
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.............*Squee*
Uh, Twilight? I think that qualifies as more than slightly ironic.
I want more Courage being Courage lol
Otherwise keep it person!
5533660 You'll get more, this update was just to establish Twilight
Can you see where this sentence contradicts itself?
Goddammit, Lunabrony.
~KBO.
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No? What am I missing?
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Talk about foals having foals.