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When Fluttershy stumbles across a small pink pup, she takes him home. Unfortunately, this only invites strange and spooky things to begin happening in Ponyville...

Link to credit the image source of which I claim no ownership or participation: http://icebreak23.deviantart.com/art/Fluttershy-The-Cowardly-Pony-273909700

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instant love. drawn in!

This is going to be interesting.

Oddly enough, I can't stand the show "Courage the Cowardly Dog", but I've yet to not love his appearance in crossovers. Is that strange?

Hmmm, interesting. I'll watch this. :pinkiesmile:

Fluttershy asked, though didn't sounded entirely upset by this.

"Sound."

"Uh-huh!" The dog yipped. Truth be told, he couldn't remember exactly how he'd gotten here, but was determined to stay safe and out of trouble until memory returned. Fluttershy didn't register this as sentient speech, but recognized the behavioral patterns, and nodded in understanding. "Alright, well... we have to move quickly, before someone sees," she said. "Come on."

Sorry to put an entire paragraph here, but you have two characters worth of dialogue in this one paragraph.

I never really watched Courage the Cowardly Dog, but I did like the few episodes I did see. I am interested in seeing where you take this, and will like and favorite to find out.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

When you said you had a story in the works featuring a nostalgic crossover in your blog, I had absolutely no idea what to expect.

I am most pleasantly surprised! :pinkiehappy:

This is a good crossover i had been a fan of Courage the Cowardly Dog shows this will have a chance of being funny.

5484417 You love Courage as a character, but the show itself gave you some sort of childhood trauma perhaps? It did that to me... :applejackconfused:

5484540 I always get warm fuzzies when someone says they actually read the blog :D

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No trauma (I didn't see it until I was much older). I just couldn't stand it.

And actually, I find Courage gets to shine as a character in crossovers far more than he did in the show.

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Just because I don't always comment on blogs doesn't mean I'm not unhealthily obsessed with checking my feed... :trixieshiftleft: :pinkiecrazy: :derpytongue2:

5484417 I know afew series/franchises that I have the same strangeness factor in the fact I can't stand them or at the very least indifferent to them yet like the appearance of them in fanfiction most of the time crossovers at that. So to me the fact you have a similar case isn't strange to me.

It's the first new story of 2015, and you guys are gonna like it, or my name's Celestia!
And it's not.

good one XD

A crossover between Courage the Cowardly Dog and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic?! Added to my read later list. I love Courage!

"Donkey Xote"
"Don Quixote"

That's rather clever of you.

5486318 i have occasionally been known for cleverness

This looks promising.

"Come on, just because it looks scary doesn't mean it is scary..."

Coming from Fluttershy, that is real character growth.

Fluttershy sighed, and began heading out into town at a snails pace,...

Extra space.

Nearly a thousand residents of a thriving town were simply gone.

Wow. It is like they are in the Middle of Nowhere.

As long as it is not a pony, or a griffon, or a dragon, or a minotaur, I am sure Fluttershy can handle it.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

I'm usually creeped out fairly easily, but not when it comes to Courage the Cowardly Dog. I'm weird. That's quite the silly video, however.

Slight errors I noticed:

He whined, doing everything in his power to get his attention.

The highlighted word should instead be - her

On either side of the bath, more fog ponies were rising up out of the mist.

Pretty sure you meant - path

5504310 Fixed! Be careful, Neko has my #1 editor spot and he might fight you for it :p

Well, that was quite fun. And Pinkie's the only one other than Shy and Courage not controlled by the fog?

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Don't worry, Neko (whoever you are)! I'm not out to take over anyone's editor spot... Plzdon'tfightme. :twilightsheepish:

Hmm...wonder what's going to happen next.

5504527 5504441 I have no intention of fighting. But I cannot let my honor be besmirched.

He babbled. Fluttershy didn't appear to understand the verbal words, but understood the general importance of getting the hell out of here.

She raced into the building, closing and locking the door. She realized only after that she was inside that she was inside Carousel Boutique.

Extra spaces.

She fumbled with the lock, but Rarity was already on her, grabbing at the pegasi's back legs with her smoking fog-legs and yanking her backwards, off her feet.

"Pegasi" is plural. You may want "pegasus'." Also, "hooves."

She got up to attack again, but the front door swung open and smashed against the wall, a large and curly shape flickering against the candle lit darkness.

"Candlelit" is one word.

She said gravely. "Come on."

Extra space.

...in order to ensure a clear pathway. Pinkie led her back to Sugarcube Corner,...

Extra space.

What the hell does "spoopy" mean?

Is it weird I imagined Pinkie as Batman?

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

"Go get me mail while you're down there!"

When did Eustace become a pirate? If he is not a pirate, or Irish, "me" a should be "my."

Courage picked himself up, brushing himself off, and gave the farmer a reproachful glare.

Two tenses here. This should be "brushed."

He howled, not 1.)entirely what 'it' 2.)was but knowing that it couldn't possibly be good.

1.) You seem to be missing a word here.
2.) Missing comma.

"Didja get me mail?"

Apparently, Eustace has always been an Irish pirate. You would not have made the same mistake twice in a row. I would like to think. So I will not point out the other ones.

The farmer cackled and gave a mighty yank,

I am not a good person.

Damn, Pinkie is so fracking Batman, right now. I look forward to more.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

5513938 That's just how Eustace talks occasionally, and it kinda works

5513846 Halloween and skeletons and this story are spoopy

Wait...you mean the others are lost? Permanently?

...this story just took a major turn into Dark, possibly into Tragedy.

5528628 Theyr not DEAD, but Courage stories rarely end peacefully

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The implication that they're permanently lost is what I was responding to.

Now, if that's something that can be fixed by the end of the story, then it's just dark.

5528940 I know what will happen, I just ask your trust and patience. I think you'll be satisfied.

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If you promise the story won't require adding a Tragedy tag at any point, that will be enough for me.

5528993

It will not require tragedy, and I'll add that note to the chapter

I was about to ask why Pinkie said "your friends" instead of "our friends."

Then I read some more, and my question was promptly answered. :rainbowderp:

This explains why Pinkie was so Batman last chapter. She is a random nameless changeling. Do not scroll over that unless you have already read chapter five.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

A crossover of Courage? From Courage the Cowardly Dog Show Starring Courage?

.............
.............*Squee*:pinkiecrazy:

She'd been in such a hurry she hadn't exactly been thorough with reading the program requirements, slightly ironic in hindsight.

Uh, Twilight? I think that qualifies as more than slightly ironic. :rainbowlaugh:

I want more Courage being Courage lol
Otherwise keep it person!

5533660 You'll get more, this update was just to establish Twilight

Every single one of them were younger than the Cutie Mark Crusaders, most of them sitting next to their parents and fidgeting in their seats.

Can you see where this sentence contradicts itself?

"Lunabrony Presents... Goodnight Woon?"

:facehoof:Goddammit, Lunabrony.:rainbowlaugh:

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

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Every single one of them were younger than the Cutie Mark Crusaders, most of them sitting next to their parents and fidgeting in their seats.

Talk about foals having foals.

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