-Alternate events DURING Magical Mystery Cure-
A moment three years in the making, it's at last come time for Princess Celestia to choose the next Princess of Equestria. Everything has been planned out, the planets aligned, the proper paperwork submitted.
It was supposed to be so easy, so simple.
How did things end up like THIS?
Created, Written, Edited and Revised by Lunabrony and Leonhard
Utterly glorious.
Simply wonderful.
That was very silly, but worthwhile. : D
Discord would've been loving THAT coronation.
Pillows for derpy
omg i couldn't help laugh from this (very funny) idea. Thank you very much. You made my dad
IN THE NAME OF THE GOD-EMPRESS DERPY HOOVES, WE SHALL FIGHT THE ENEMY OF THE SOFT BAKED COOKIES UNTIL NARY A SINGLE COOKIE REMAINS STANDING IN OUR WAY!
*totes doesn't know what is going on*
*doesn't care*
*totally awesome*
Would be funny if we had a Princess Derpy gone mad with power
Maybe something akin to...
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I have not read this yet, though I intend to do so later. That cover image made me think of this video.
Best princess
That was cute.
Very Good
Missed pony-isms. Though since it is in the narrative and the narrator is third person omniscient, it really is just narrator's prerogative.
The apostrophe should be before the t in 'twas, it replaces the i. Also, "Ah" in this case should be capitalized.
This sentence is slightly worded incorrectly. The comma is superfluous and the emboldened "to" should be placed between "had" and "wait."
These words should be inverted.
A word seems to be missing here.
Quite funny. I was laughing throughout the entire story. A comedy worthy of M. Night Shyamalan. I shall favorite and like.
KBO.
Awww..
I love Derpy
I love you Princess Derpy!
I was grinning like a child the whole time I was reading this.
Good job.
4839686 Fixed. I don't capitalize Applejacks ah's just out of personal preference... it just doesn't look right for some reason. Everything else has been edited. Thank you, as always. You're a welcome substitute for purple smart.
Terrbily wrong...
Or terribly right?
Amazing You have true talent.
Poor Celestia, if she have to stay with Princess Derpy Hooves... And poor Equestria
Finally, the wrongs have been... righted? Righten? I don't know. The mistakes have been corrected! All hail Princess Derpy! Down with the Purple impostor!
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPYYYY!!!!!!!
I wanted to take a moment and thank you ALL for your wonderful comments and input. I've deleted a few comments NOT because of negative reception or trolling but simply due to spoilers. Please keep in mind when making your comments that many people have not read the story yet.
Thank you all for your support ^^
Derpy Hooves: Princess of Motherhood, Muffin, Determination, Awesomeness and Reality
I reeeaaally want to really like this story.
It's greatly written and original. I actually quite enjoyed it.
I disliked it for personal reasons.
I just don't like when stories depict Ditzy Do (i also dislike calling her Derpy, but I don't dislike the story for calling her that, since most of the fandom calls her Derpy Hooves) as a complete idiot. I don't know exactly why, but that has never sat well with me.
But personal issues aside I'm giving this story a thumbs-up anyway, because all in all it was quite good.
Forget Twilight, Derpy's the best Princess.
4842147 I know what you mean, I have the same problem. For me, it doesn't sit well because she is disabled. Yes, her eyes look differently to ours, but its just plain mean it assume she's stupid because of it. Another thing I really dislike is people calling her a retard because of the eye thing. Dizy is a really nice character, she doesn't deserve to be hated because of this. But, haters gonna hate. There's nothing you can do.
4842147 I feel the same way about Derpy. I prefer to think of her as the loving mother of Dinky who was unfortunately cursed with strabismus and is therefore very clumsy and makes a lot of mistakes, but not outright stupid. She doesn't have to be Einstein by any means, but...
That having been said, this was an enjoyable story in its own right. Good job.
That was pretty neat. Cool story, bro. Really--really really.
Fave'd and Liked.
Hey, if it worked, she must have been worthy somehow.
Best pony is best princess. Thank you for this.
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*Laughs and applauds* Bravo.
Free Muffins for everypony!
4846262 NOT free!
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That's funny. nothin else to it
I just don't know what went wrong
4842147 really, i always though ditzys body simply couldent keep up with the speed of her brain.
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I love it. I love it so much. Haaaah
Also, your writing style is MINT!
4848091 essetailly her brain works too fast for her body to keep up with, rsulting in jumbled up signals and her crashing into stuff
Damnit! So close to ruining Twilight's life for one universe!
Soo we have to buy muffins on muffin day?
Good idea though!
Princess Derpy! Leader if the bronies under her majesty Queen Faust!
This was hilarious and cringe inducing. Brings me back to the Princess Dinky fic too. Great work.
Luverly.
4842147 But... Ditzy "Derpy" Hooves-Doo, (Or Ditzy D. HD for short), has a severe mental handicap. She can't help who she is, and it would be mean to ask her to. She's not dumb, she just has a condition.
SPOILER ALERT!!!
Hmm. My creative writing teacher told me many times NEVER to have a story end with "And then I woke up". It's just weak writing. Plus, I wanted a full-length fan-fic about Celestia and the rest of Equestria learning to deal with "Princess Derpy" and a plot about Celestia desperately trying to reverse the spell, or ascend Twilight. And when she fails to do either she has to figure out a way to have Princess Derpy not destroy the kingdom.
And it would end with Princess Derpy finally finding a place for her in the kingdom, and making the world a better place.
I REALLY wanted a story like that. But no, they had to resort to the "And then I woke up" cliche. And to think I was gonna favorite this story. Bah.
Liked, but not faved.