Roses And Thorns

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Morphy

Morphy #1 · Feb 4th, 2015 · · ·

And once more Fate picks the worst time to send an annoyingly helpful pony over.

RadicalDishonesty

RadicalDishonesty #2 · Feb 4th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Alright... I think you lost me here, with the main character emotionally manipulating Cork into doing the sex act she wanted (and he didn't), and humiliating him while he does it. Even the part where she freaks out because he seems aggressive adds to the feeling that she's manipulating him into having only her own desires fulfilled, even if she didn't do it intentionally to manipulate him, it obviously did.

Not to mention the constant passive-aggressive "you asked for this", which is essentially bullying: she's implying he's pathetic if he says he doesn't want it, and at the end even if he didn't like it he couldn't say anything about it because he would come off as pathetic for letting someone hurt him when he didn't want it. So even if it did hurt (not just physically, but emotionally being emasculated while she's doing it), then he couldn't admit it.

Mutalist Alad V

Mutalist Alad V #3 · Feb 4th, 2015 · · ·

Why does every promising story you write turn into clop?

Canary In The Coal Mine

Canary In The Coal Mine #4 · Feb 4th, 2015 · · ·

I want to add that I actually enjoyed this chapter quite a bit.

I was going to add that I enjoyed it not just because of the clop (even though it was really good, I love awkward sexy times), but then I realized that really, this chapter WAS almost all clop minus the breakdown, and it seems odd to praise a PTSD moment.

I'll just reiterate that I really enjoyed the chapter to balance out some of the comments against.

Sir Hat

Sir Hat #5 · Feb 4th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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...You do realize that's the whole idea behind femdom....right?

RadicalDishonesty

RadicalDishonesty #6 · Feb 4th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah... Looking back, I shouldn't have really expected anything else. Somehow I didn't realize was going to seriously be full on humiliation fetish until this chapter.

Sir Hat