I need moar!!!!k

And now he feels the need to express his gratitude in the most sincere of ways

Having a threesome with Derpy and dinky?

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Let's make it a fivesome heh heh If you know what I mean.....

Nice story ........ and to the one who suggested it ...... Derpy and Dinky REALLY? Dude that's seriously sick.

4677172 I used the Dinky tag becasue she had some mild appearance in the story, not becasue I planned to make clop with her. I'm not trusting in my skills enough to write foalcon

THIS CALLS FOR A SEQUEL

4677185 Maybe if the demand is high enough
Like this comment if you want a sequal

um....The feel...

Dat cover art... derpy...!!!

I wouldn't mind a chapter with a pregnant Derpy getting some attention.

You know, just last night I was thinking there isn't enough romantic Derpy clop. Thank you for for helping to rectify that.

I demand a sequel!

Sequel. Definitely needs a sequel.
also an editor would be a good idea.

was i the only one who tought this was a dungeons and dragons crossover because of the title?

4677175 actually your better off not doing foalcon *shudders* its better not to even venture down that dark road

Oh please write more...will the foal be satyr-like, or would she/he be full-pony?

4683443 I never planned to write a sequal when I published the story so I can't say what's the child is like. I'm still toying with the idea of a sequal, though

Oh my, what a tease.

oh you focking tease....u WOT M8?

4685562 Good, good. I'm glad you noticed my reference. Am I to assume that the story was to your liking?

In Equestria, all species are compatible. Well, in most AUs anyway. I will now be reading the sequel.

waaaaaaaaaaaa i love it my friend
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That's partially why I started with, "I get that this is supposed to be a joke." I didn't want to dive too deep into it and simply offered an alternative scenario.

Though problem I had was that it was a throwaway moment that altered the known canon of an existing character. From what we know of Celestia, she can only control the movement of the sun (besides the normal usage of magic). If you are going expand on a character's abilities, it should have something accompany it that makes it feel like it fits, or else it just feels awkward and out of place. In addition, a brief scene change to Celestia giggling would have been a nice touch to help bridge the awkward gap instead of it feeling like some distant ghostly form of Celestia was toying with him.

I liked this story, good job!

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thanks mate!

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wait there's a sequel

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yarp: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/203893/half-pony-half-human-the-perfect-daughter

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thanks