Mary Sue VS Fluttershy?
When chaos is made, the ponies gather to face a menace of something horrible, however-With a Mary Sue who is untouchable to banish or destroy-What do you do?
Why let Fluttershy deal with it!
((Thank you Alovelylittlecomplex for editing, go see this magnificent person NOW))
Now, this here is some stuff worth liking
Thank you for writing this.
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W-well urrh thank you dear sir! This is just a random thought that I wanted down before I make my offical chapter upon chapter story I'm glad you like it.
May I ask you're favourite part?
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You're VERY welcome! And is that-
A Engineer of Team Fortress?!????? ANOTHER TEAM FORTRESS LOVER *Sniff *
Oh and glad you like it may I also ask you 0, you're favourite part?
4667117 Fluttershy's rage rant at the Mary Sue alicorn in general was pretty great, but the ending with Sombra takes the cake, in my opinion.
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Thank you so much dear sir! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthanktyoythankyoy!
You have no idea how happy I am to have joined this fandom!
4667141 It was my pleasure.
4667108 Mary Sues are stupid. Period
It's about time somepony stomped them out and I'm glad you did
I thought it was Ensign Sue.
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Perhaps this could be Fluttershy's next target.
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It happened in a dream honestly I was walking, talking with Flutters, ran into a faceless Alicorn.
And you get the idea of Fluttershy beating the shit-excuse my language-out of the Alicorn. So now that I got this story outta my head, I can get to the romance stories LIKE MY NAME SAYS!
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I wonder if Fluttershy is up for it though? Considering she is so done with the shit-excuse my language.
Loved the story, noticed one tiny error though.
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Wow if I had only one small detail out then-then THEN I HAVE GOOD GRAMMER
Thank you for telling me dear madam!
This is pretty epic aside from grammatical (confusion between "you're" and "your") and syntax (new speaker, new paragraph) errors.
4667189 I'm writing a romance too. It's sort of starting out like My Little Dashie but it totally won't be. Sad bit is, 2/3 feedback is dislikes
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Thank you dear sir! AND Thankyouthankyouthankyou for the follow! I'm glad you like it, may I ask the favourite part? If you have one?
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Seems VERY legit! Tell me once it's out
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Oh and I forgot! What is you're favourite part of the story? You don't have to reply, I just like feedback and talking to lovely chaps and woman
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You're quite welcome. I liked all of Equestria's reactions to the Mary Sue coming in. The world stopped for her.
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Well! I might make a extra chapter with a fellow Dino's picture, but now well!
So many ideas for shipping are hitting my head with bats I can't even THINK! I'm in heaven I love this site, why, why can't I just live in this website and see and read words of a person.
Sucks to have to work and go otherwise you'll get robbed huh?
Well this is a strange yet cool fic! Good job mate!
You earned a fav and follow
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She can do better than me though
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Thank you-Wait do I know you-My god, please don't tell me you are a Mary Sue user too?
And what was you're favourite part? If you don't mind me asking?
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Nah Im'a okay
And honestly? Everything, but the favourite bit was the Braveheart reference you did there Yup, I know movies
What the heck did I just read?
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Random musings of a author, a war against a Mary Sue, and Fluttershy being the most badass-excuse my language- mother fucker ever
Any favourite parts of it? Or just to confused on the story?
You know whats funny?
I just submitted a story called 'The Beating of a Gary Stu', except Skorge kills him.
I had no idea this one existed, and THANK YOU for writing it!
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You're very welcome! Ideas and chats are welcome in the Shipper Household! May I ask you're favourite part?
4667328 I am a sir! Also, I loved the smack down flutters gave that OC
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I laughed my ass off when Fluttershy swore!
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Heh, gotta love that part , this entire story came from an idea of a annoying Oc person on a roleplay site actually, and WHAM! inspiration hit me in the anger!
And VERY SORRY! SORRYSORRYSORRYSORRY!
4667345 It's already started, the title is Destiny Sparkle and I've actually planned out the ending already without getting there yet
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I laughed at my own words too, I had to get my boyfriend to pinch my arm to stop me from laughign and sprawling over the computer
4667599 0_o We'll … you are forgiven.
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Ah! Start at the end to begin the begin! Clever!
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Still, I'm sorry for my mistake
4667616 So what screams 'It's a chick!' About me to you
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I got no good comeback I'm sorry, forgive me, you can walk away if you want
4667613 Eh, not really, but that's one way to put it
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4667644 Is alright, this made me laugh.
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I-I just love you all, I'm in the favoured b-box....Flint Sparks-THE.FLINT.SPARKS. Favoured THIS! Sappy stupid story I MADE! I can't thank you all enough
There are innaccuracies, grammatical errors, fourth wall breaking by non pinkie chars...
BUT I DON'T CARE. RED AND BLACK DARK PAST ALICORN OCs CAN GO SOMEWHERE ELSE!
Also... I have a changeling OC that became a King but there is actually characterization and he ain't OP. I welcome the ridicule. Oh and he married QC. Have fun!
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Glad you like it! Thanks for the fav as well Onwards to the torturing of Sombra!
4667794 Thinking of a sequel?
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WE'VE BEEN FOUND
4667805 I don't get it. Found what?
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MADAM, GET TO THE CHOPPA-Oh wait, nevermind we're okay Bob.
Ummmmm nothing?
4667825 Mysterious are the ways of the force.
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Damn it I have no comeback there.
The story is up
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...My God,
My God,
My
God,