Love isn't easy really, especially where you got a eternal being typing everything you do and learn from-Wait wrong story.
Here in this story lies a fantasy made from millions of Authors and Bronies of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic, a fantasy of love, drinking, bar fights, cuddling, singing and even dancing. Celestia is amsued, Luna is confused, Discord is somewhat a big part in all of this.
To sum it up, everyone is shipped with everyone.
And I mean EVERYONE.
To nobody's dismay.
Chapters (4)
Okay, a few things here.
1) When did Pinkie Pie turn into Fluttershy? I mean, isn't she supposed to be the one who laughs at things dangerous and spooky? The one who laughed at the Everfree Forest made scary by Nightmare Moon? Who wasn't phased the the scariest river tunnel in ALL of Equestria? The Castle of Friendship should be about the last place in Equestria where she should be spooked.
2) Except under very special and specific circumstances, every speaker should get their own paragraph. It becomes too easy to become confused when this is not done.
3) Your punctuation and spacing between paragraphs needs some work as well.
But the story is cute and touching even though it's rough about the edges.
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Whelp! Nightmares are nightmares, and Pinkie loves her friends so much
thank you for the notice, I'll try better, it's just I'm russian 
I haven't got used to the English words and folk around my town 
Hesitant due to tragedy tag, but will fav anyway.
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4672829 Pssst........If for some reason you want my unending ameration for all time, one chapter must have Shining Armor shipped with Princess Celestia. Just a suggestion.
Do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it.
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I really don't ship TwiPie, but i will wait for next chapters! Also:
Sunset and Twilight... DO IT!
Just a suggestion... And Luna with Shining, i really don't know why, but i ship this two!
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Don't worry
I'll do every ship I can do 
which is ALL SHIPS
Nice, though if you ship Blueblood I'll slap your internet.
How would that work?
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...BluebloodxNothing
Well, I don't quite consider myself to be much of a "shipper," at least not yet, but I am delving into that particular practice more and more...
Anyway, I have only one response to this part of the description:
"To sum it up, everyone is shipped with everyone. And I mean EVERYONE."
Well, let's unfurl the sails and see where the wind carries us!
DISLESTIA
This is gonna be a lot of shipping...I'll get the boxes.
I will not believe your claim about everyone until I see TwilightxEverfree.
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You should see me when I'm actually trying.
Ever heard of Rarityxs'more(shmore/smore/whatever the spelling is)
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Would you accompany me on the SS_Overlord Ship?
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Are you kidding? I have a VIP ticket.
Pinkie PiexLaughing Gas
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You see, young one, you cannot merely ship everyone. You must ship everything. Because after some time, you run out of everyone's.
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I have much to learn sensi
forgive my stubbornness, teach me O great one
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Your first lesson will be in proper use of poetic justice. 
Very well
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Good, you have been taught well. I will now gift you this.
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I shall use it well, sensi
Dislestia! I love this ship! Now, have a cute drawing:
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Keep with this good work!
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It's nearly the holidays
but while on school weeks, one or even two stories a day 
*See chapter, see that is Derpy and Doctor...
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*You know because is Let's Go in French
Such cuteness!
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Nothing better than the most delicious Ship! Oh you, now i want more of this two! Argh, i think i gonna read Taken For Granite again... Also:
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AJ will never catch Pinkie!!!
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When I get a full editor, I'm going to make a full story about my fav ship
Which makes Applejack still oblivious, oh you AJ
I don't get it
THIS LOOK'S LIKE A CALL FOR PRO SHIPPING
BLUEBLOODxDIRT!!!!!! HDVBFBDGCDYEGUDCUDCEFH*flips valcano*
Btw I could edit it
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I'd like that very much
can you just give me an example of you're editing? 
4692063 I mean you should post this on a group called pro shipping and my editing level (not over 9000) is around 7
When will we see a FlutterDash one?