This story may look short, But it has a sequel that is over 50 chapters long and this is story 1 of 3 in the series! I hope you enjoy! Rate fairly and I always love comments!
P.S The quality gets increasingly better by a dramatic amount as you go through the chapters.
2021 Edit: Please be merciful these stories are a product of their time and my inexperience in writing, that said please enjoy what you can anyway! 
My name is Chris James, and I just turned 19 and I am coming home from a party with my family, here are a few things about me. I am a closet brony, I am a very nice guy, I love animals and I can adjust to things rather fast. But when my trip takes a wild turn (and I mean that literally) I find myself put in a very strange predicament.
I can't read it right now, so I'll put it on my RIL list.
grammer iz fer n00bz
This is great!
I had just uploaded these and I was in the middle of actually editing the grammar n' stuff, as for the plot, there is a big problem arising in the next chapter for those wondering
"Why the fuck are you doing this fucking shit again?" - What I said when I saw this
1406681 no u suk nd ur mom sux
i like it, maybe start a new line for each one talking, but it seems good.
I actually enjoy reading these generic HiE fics. Your grammar is far from perfect though, get a pre reader and go over your chapters a few more times before publishing them.
Well, I decided to speed things up a bit, I am releasing the third chapter very soon, and it will have better spelling or grammar then the rest, after I release it, Im editing the rest to fix mistakes
its an earphone, attacked to my O-pod
Sounds dangerous
1406964 heheh.. yea... fixed... lol
At this rate, your editor could be the comments themselves.
1407018 o_o lol, Maybe, but I don't have anyone helping me on this story, its just me, that's why I said be brutal
Finished editing chapter 1, let me know If I missed anything... I--If... that's alright I mean....
edited chapter 2 as well, enjoy
F***ING Clifhangers!!!!!
1407554 bahahaha, I was waiting for someone to say that. You sir... do not disappoint
But you said it would be longer!
1407780 as compensation im making chapter 4 a-lot longer and i already have it half done, im deciding if i should hold it till tomorrow for more editing, or just release it now, and say fuck it to 1 a day, ill post as i go
For God's sake I just finished Chapter 3 to come back and see that you uploaded another one.
1) THANK YOU! I really like it when people type speedy so that I don't have to wait 10 hours for the next one.
2) I love this story, keep up the awesome work. ^_^
ps if anyone can tell me whether we're allowed to curse on this form or not that would be greatly appreciated. :D
1408180 hahaha
1) your welcome
2) thanks for the support
3) to me, i don't care if you swear really
1408180 also, im up for any ideas, like if you wanted your own character put in the story, or maybe even if you want me to use a name you pick for the 'evil' guy, i have a name, but im open for better ones
HOW
DO
YOU
KEEP
WRITING
THAT
FAST?
1409296 *cough*my username*cough* and you think that was fast? I am already 2/3 the way through number 7
I'm afraid to go to sleep because when I wake up I think I will see that you wrote another 5 chapters...
1409360 DON'T DO IT, IM RELEASING CHAPTER 7 IN ABOUT 5 MINS! its SOOOOOOO funny
1409439 ARE YOU FRIGGIN KIDDING ME?! You write so fast!
1409474 ah thank you
i aim to please 
Moving in was a total WTF moment for me. Pinkie spiked the punch? Does she do this in the series?!
1409494 well, she makes a joke towards that line, but doesn't actually do it
I just have one question for all of you, What do you guys think about the series overall so far? do i continue? or no? Also, ill tell you the name of chapter 7 that is almost done.
The hangover
"Fluttershy" not "Flutter shy."
Good story, btw.
1409518 I say Flutter shy so my auto correct will leave me alone
1409523 You're not healthy for my OCD.
1409523
How do you write fanfics? Do you do it in word or something and then upload to the site or?...
1409545 no, i do it on the site, why?
1409560
just 'cuz
Also keep up the good work, I'll be offline in 24 minutes
1409588 ok, im gunna finish this one up quick then!
1409603
Kewl
Also, it klutzjellyfish a cool name? It's not my usual, awesome name because I don't want my friends to see me on this site. LOL
1409632 ya it's pretty cool, but how would your friends see you on this site unless they were on it too?
1409648
What if they HAPPENED to search up daschnookle on Google. deys be liek... Oh wai, I just Googled myself, this didn't appear.
How do you change you- OHHHHHHH WAIT A MINUTE.
what would you guys say if i added this chapter now? its only 750 or so words, but it goes over a lot of funny shenanigans n' stuff, and tomorrow i make a decently large chapter?
1409670 hahaha yea
Omai god finish writing already! the suspense is killing me!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD still alot to go....
JK! POSTING NOW lets see who gets first comment?
Hehehe..... thats actually kinda funny.
1409739 i know, i was wondering if anyone would think the beginning was funny or whatever as well
so, what does everyone think? is it good so far? should i continue this story?
you guys wont like this.... im halfway through chapter 8, and its called... 'hanging' with friends
1409767 ya you should definitely continue the story
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