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RyanMagika


PLEASE STOP MESSAGING ME, MY USER IS NOT RELATED TO ANY OTHER AUTHOR OR THEIR CREATIONS. THIS IS MY ONLY FANFIC ACCOUNT.

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This story is a sequel to The Story of Nyx: A Snowflake in The Wind


Several months after Nyx frees Snowdrop from the pony version of Purgatory, life in the small town of Ponyville seems to be finally calming down. The young couple's relationship is kept under wraps well enough to not attract much attention and it seems like it's only going up from here. But when the secret of how long Snowdrop has actually been dead is revealed, the two's relationship is strained and torn. Combined with the daily visits of Princess Luna, trying to investigate the sudden high levels of divine magic in area, can Nyx and Snowdrop make their relationship work? Or is it doomed to be a permanent divide?


This story officially takes place after Season 4
Editor wishes to remain anonymous.
Nyx is from Past Sins by Pen Stroke
Snowdrop:Link
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Comments ( 36 )

AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! :pinkiegasp::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::moustache::moustache:

Alriiiight!
Cool chapter dude, can't wait to see more!

Comment posted by RyanMagika deleted Oct 11th, 2014

Noticed a few typos, I think you can spot them pretty fast if you look over what you have posted. The most blatant one is "this spells great Spike. New recipe?" Shouldn't it be, 'this smells good'?

Nyx paused and watched every step she took with a degree of concern. Snowdrop had four months to memorize the castle’s layout but Nyx still worried she would accidentally fall down the stairs or run into a corner.

For a second I thought Nyx was babying Snowdrop a lot. Then i read the next sentence and realized I was really dumb:facehoof:

Damnit, this feels like a cliffhanger to me NOOOO. I'm going to like this more than the last.

The light blue one stopped by the stairs before taking a quick sweeping look over the room. Once she was assured that she got everything she spoke up. “I think I got everything, Nyx. I’ll be downstairs.” She said.

This makes no sense. Why would snowdrop LOOK around the room. And how would that assure her she didn't forget anything? She is blind, meaning she can't see.

5005442 She's not really looking, its just by turning her head across the room she goes through it in her mind like a checklist.

5005486 Maybe you should say that then, it is rather unclear and a bit confusing. At least for me.

zel
zel #10 · Sep 15th, 2014 · · 6 ·

Nyx

Snowdrop

ugh
no
just no

nooo...I loved the first oneee...but im too impatient to read un finished stories :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry::pinkiecrazy:

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hmmm, waiting is hard.

When will there be more? I just want to know.:applejackunsure:

5210442 Yeah i'm just dealing with school stuff right now

*acts like publisher*

You have one month before you meet the deadline!

Oh man I can't wait for the next chapter! This has been a pretty good series you've got going here! The original had a little too many grammar mistakes, most of which took place during the Ursa fight, but other than that, pretty good job you've got going here! I also find the sequel to be a lot better in plot format and grammar wise. Can't wait for the second chapter, man! :pinkiehappy:

“Morning.” Nyx replied, stifling a yawn. She smiled as she turned to Snowdrop. Nyx took her seat next to the filly, a bright grin plastered on her face. “Morning Droppy.”

Was nyx referencing snow white?

more plz? plz

More I love snowdrop I fell in love with her story please

I'm starting to get a little dissapointed in this series, Ryan. It's been MONTHS ever since you've uploaded the first chapter of this fanfic and yet there still hasn't been anything up. I'm sorry, Ryan, but I can't follow an author who can't put time into his work. I don't like unfollowing people, but if you can't get anything up soon then I have no reason to stick around for this fanfic. It's a shame because I was really enjoying it. :ajsleepy:

Is this story dead?
I hope not. I liked the last one.

Can you please update your story soon I'm very interested in the story keep up a good work update more soon :twilightsmile:

I swear this story hasn't been updated for what like 2 years now looks like he forgot or has given up on the series all together.

Comment posted by DeltaArrow deleted Oct 24th, 2017

More Chapters please. Make a happy ending for this stoy by making snowdrop an alicorn so she and Nyx can be together forever.

Still disappointed to see that this series has died the way it did.

Will you continue this story or not?

IT'S SO SAD!!!!!!
WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN!!!
SO MUCH POTENTIAL!!!
LOST!

*Braves in and out*
I know that im not the creator of the story, but we never know unless he updates his account...
"Only time can tonly time caonn teonidgsxixhxjich "

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