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  • E Trinkets

    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber  · Pen Stroke
    7,396 words · 28,016 views  ·  2,176  ·  28  · 
  • E Nightmare or Nyx?

    Can Spike trust Nyx again after her actions almost got Twilight hung?  · Pen Stroke
    11,379 words · 34,862 views  ·  2,576  ·  71  · 
  • E Winter Bells

    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?  · Pen Stroke
    95,683 words · 31,299 views  ·  3,086  ·  43  · 
  • E First Hours

    These are Nyx's first hours.  · Pen Stroke
    5,737 words · 11,758 views  ·  1,624  ·  38  · 

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  • E Trinkets

    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
    7,396 words · 28,016 views  ·  2,176  ·  28
  • E Winter Bells

    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?
    95,683 words · 31,299 views  ·  3,086  ·  43
  • T A Mug of Hard Cider

    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
    12,451 words · 17,477 views  ·  1,752  ·  22
  • T Drop of Moonshine

    A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink
    10,347 words · 26,677 views  ·  2,866  ·  41
  • T Into The Depths

    Celestia must brave the depths of her old castle to save Twilight and Luna
    44,246 words · 14,034 views  ·  1,254  ·  19
  • E Better Living Through Science and Ponies

    Not all is well in Equestria when a failing portal gun brings Aperture Science to the land of ponies
    39,979 words · 43,975 views  ·  2,645  ·  49
  • E Bureaucracy is Magic

    Can Ponyville survive when our favorite six mares have to fill in for the mayor?
    14,347 words · 5,385 views  ·  545  ·  8
  • E Creeping Darkness

    Alan Wake must write a story where Twilight faces the Darkness of his world to save Equestria
    63,186 words · 6,548 views  ·  684  ·  12

Blog Posts101

  • 1w, 4d
    Life Pulse & Nevermind

    12 comments · 447 views
  • 7w, 6d
    Ice Bucket Challenge & Game Project Plug

    So, I was challenge by BronyWriter last evening, and so I had to squeeze this fun little bit of brain freeze in during my morning routine as I got ready for work.

    To reiterate from my video, I challenge Blankedmind, Gremlin Grenade, JustAnotherTimeLord, The Illustrious Q.

    The challenge to Kkat has been retracted. She isn't in a position where she can perform the challenge due to a lack of equipment & funds as well as her personal preferences about the internet.

    Also, on  side note, a project I contributed to is back on Kickstarter. Scott Easley's 3x3 Wildstyle Basketball, a mobile street basketball game. If you supported it last time, please go do so again. If you haven't, please go check it out.

    28 comments · 708 views
  • 11w, 1d
    Bronycon Day 2 Plan * Identifying Attire

    Day one was awesome. Met too many people to list off in these few minutes I have to write this. Today looks to be more awesome and my busiest con day since I have all three of my panels today. I'm wearing an Applejack shirt today and blue jeans. Hope to see you around. Best time to catch me is after my panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Quills and Sofas Hangout - 3:00 - 4:00 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    2 comments · 320 views
  • 11w, 2d
    Bronycon Day 1 Plan & Identifying Attire

    So, since there are folks wanting to meet up with me today, here is a rough idea of where I'll be and when. Also, such a late start today. I slept in, but I had a reason. Work made me stay up all night Wednesday to put out a last minute fire.

    0) 12:00 Float around the convention, likely checking out vendor hall

    1) 2:00 - Vendor Hall Shadow Box booth. Someone ordered something Past Sins related and they wanted me to sign it.

    2) 3:00 - 4:00 - I'll chill out at the Quill's and Sofa's room for an hour. Probably the easiest time you'll have finding me.

    If your looking for me today, I'm wearing a gray plaid long sleeve shirt and blue jeans.

    Hope everyone has a wonderful time at Bronycon today and I hope to see several of you around.

    4 comments · 342 views
  • 12w, 1d
    Bronycon, Shattered Kingdoms, & A Plug for a New Past Sins Movie Project

    Bronycon looms just next week, and I look forward to the fact I once again get to attend this year. So I hope to see lots of friends and to meet anyone new. One person asked in e-mail if I'd be willing to sign his/her copy of Past Sins while I'm there. I'm totally cool with doing that for anyone that asks, just be sure to have a pen since there is no guarantee I'll remember to have one.

    As to Bronycon itself, I get to be on three panels this year. The last one I'll speak about in greater length, but the first two are writing panels. I'll be returning properly to the panel I kind of snuck onto last year, the Do's and Don't of Fanfiction. I'll also be on the Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction panel, both on Saturday. In fact, all three of my panels are on Saturday this year it would seem. It makes for a very interesting day.

    Now, as for the last panel, it is for a project I've been contributing to as a partial-writer as well as a story adviser. That project is "Shattered Kingdoms" and I'll be on the panel with several other members of the development team. Shattered Kingdoms is a game project that has been going on for several months now. The team lead, Gremlin Grenade, has a blog post from Fiesta Equestria last year that tells a lot more about the project then I can really fit into such a multi-purpose blogpost.

    Now not only is the development team having a panel this year, but there will be a live demo of the game available to play. I believe it will be in the Baltimare Arcade room, since it's the only electronic game room I'm aware of, but I'm sure Gremline Grenade will post up a blog soon with more information on what the demo will contain and verify where it can be played.

    Also, the team is looking for more writers to fill out its ranks and to ensure the story is as polished and properly complex as possible. So if you have any interest, drop Gremlin Grenade or come see us at our panel. The time and place are below, along with the time and place of my other two panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    Again, I hope to see a lot of you there, and I'll see if I can't do something to make myself easily identifiable. (Besides the fact I basically wear the same outfits to every convention :P. Saturday I'll be sure to save my Applejack shirt and red, plaid short-sleeve button-down shirt.)

    And to wrap up this blog post, a commenter on Past Sins point out a new animation project that is starting to get underway. Someone new has begun a project to make Past Sins into an animated feature. It takes a lot of effort for someone to get far enough to even have a teaser trailer for something like this, so go give these guys some love and get hyped. (Especially because their design for Night Stone Castle looks pretty amazing!)

    TLDR version:

    - Going to Bronycon

    - I'm on three panels (check the list above for times and locations)

    - I'm a member of the Shattered Kingdom's dev team

    - We're having a panel and live demos at Bronycon

    - We're looking for writers, contact Gremlin Grenade.

    - Watch the video above for a Past Sins Movie Teaser Trailer, and give the creators some love.

    EDIT: To clarify some misconceptions in the comments, I am not doing the movie. Just giving a plug to the guys/gals who are.

    26 comments · 1,337 views
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On a dark night filled with even darker magics, an insane cult attempts to give Nightmare Moon a body and life of her own, utterly separate from Princess Luna. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created.

Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. Is she Nightmare Moon reborn or is she simply a doppelganger with a soul and mind of her own? Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat?

Or, will Nyx be forced to inherit the sins that may not even be hers and become the greatest evil Equestria has ever known?

First Published
29th Aug 2012
Last Modified
30th Aug 2012
#3 · 111w, 4d ago · 1 · 2 · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

O

MY

FUCKING GOD

Im going to admit it

i cried a little bit

#4 · 111w, 4d ago · 12 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

OMG! It's here finally!

Look out feature box, you are about to be destroyed!

I cannot tell you how much I love this fic.. nah, this should be called a epic!

Can't wait for my copy of the hard back to arrive!

Now If you excuse me, time to celebrate

IT BEGINS

And here comes the horde

The feature box will never be the same...

YES! :pinkiehappy:

Kitaaaaaaaaaa

Oooh, you brought it here!

The Feature Box will be broken for a month now. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmm... I've heard of this story before...

Sequel please? :twilightblush:

Dear god........:yay: Also We are going to need a new featured box.....

YES!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!!!

Oh, God I have waited for this moment! NOW TO READ AND NOT LEAVE MY ROOM! :rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

#16 · 111w, 4d ago · · 37 · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

YOU STOLE THIS STORY!!!

R.I.P Featured Box :ajsleepy:

Glad to see it finally up here Pen Stroke, sorry I kind of dropped off on helping with it :pinkiesad2:

Well, it'll be good to finally read this one.

#21 · 111w, 4d ago · 1 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

This story is one of my favourite fim-fictions and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I'm very pleased to see it here! :twilightsmile:  

>>1181047

No this is perfectly legit.

I can confirm it.

#23 · 111w, 4d ago · 1 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

I love this story!! I listened to it of youtube from Vozdesuenos, and when he hasn't updated, I pretty much read the rest of the way. Bravo my friend, bravo!:rainbowdetermined2::eeyup::ajsmug:

YES! I have been waiting for this!

And there it is, the perfect excuse that I needed to read this again. THANK YOU! Take it, take them! all of my yays!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

I still haven't read this...

IT IS TIME!

OH NOES...  All those other stories I have to read are gonna get pushed back in the queue, just so I can reread another.  :yay:

Just to be sure... This is the FINISHED version, right? No more being told we need to re-read chapters...

(Also, Everfree 2012 writing panel shoutout! Woo!:pinkiehappy:)

IT BEGINS

Promised myself to reread this when it would be posted here. Looking forward to it...

Huzzah! I was wondering if this ever would make it on this site. Time for a reread!

>>1181047 Actually, this is the guy who wrote it, Pen Stroke. He just finally decided to bring it here.

#37 · 111w, 4d ago · 1 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

Been meaning to read this ever since I finished Fallout: Equestria. Needed a super epic fanfic to read.

This one I think I can and need to manage. Background Pony's chapters are just too long...

Time to become even more well-read!

oh god, there goes my social life

#38 · 111w, 4d ago · 2 · · Prelude: Resurrection ·

EEE!!!

It's here it's finally hear.  Well I know what I'm doing for the wrest of the day.

O my....Past Sins here? Instant Fave!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#40 · 111w, 4d ago · 2 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

I've been waiting for a chance to celebrate something Fanfiction related so here's to Past Sin on FimFiction commence the fireworks

#41 · 111w, 4d ago · 1 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

This story took me around 18 hours straight to read. Meaning I read this for 18 hours straight. I loved every bit of this story on Google Docs, so I will do my part and like and favorite this story to help the cause of getting this story to the Feature Box. :ajsmug:

#42 · 111w, 4d ago · 2 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

>71 likes

>4 views

Seems legit.

Anywho, now that this is finally on fimfiction, I shall read it for the first time. Time to initiate Operation: Ignore Hype.

For all the controversy around this fic, I personally find it quite enjoyable.

Well, I'm taking shelter for the rest of the day.

I hope the world is still there when I return.

#45 · 111w, 4d ago · 1 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

Within five minutes it's already taken over the feature box

#47 · 111w, 4d ago · 3 · · 15: Missing Joy ·

There are a lot of good moments in this story, but this chapter, "missing joy", is probably my favourite.

Ivan receiving the impression that this story might be worth reading.  I suppose I shall read it then.

#49 · 111w, 4d ago · 2 · · 21: The End of the Nightmare ·

>>1181110 I know, it's crazy, it's almost like it's been around for months and people who've read it before are pre-emptively liking it. MADNESS.

>>1181088  Agreed, and not just cause that Colgate is creeping the everything outta me...

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