Sequels4

  • E Trinkets

    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber  · Pen Stroke
    7,396 words · 28,273 views  ·  2,194  ·  29  · 
  • E Nightmare or Nyx?

    Can Spike trust Nyx again after her actions almost got Twilight hung?  · Pen Stroke
    11,379 words · 35,155 views  ·  2,589  ·  71  · 
  • E Winter Bells

    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?  · Pen Stroke
    95,683 words · 31,597 views  ·  3,105  ·  43  · 
  • E First Hours

    These are Nyx's first hours.  · Pen Stroke
    5,737 words · 11,893 views  ·  1,631  ·  38  · 

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  • E Winter Bells

    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?
    95,683 words · 31,597 views  ·  3,105  ·  43
  • T A Mug of Hard Cider

    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
    12,451 words · 17,614 views  ·  1,762  ·  22
  • E Trinkets

    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
    7,396 words · 28,273 views  ·  2,194  ·  29
  • T Drop of Moonshine

    A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink
    10,347 words · 26,814 views  ·  2,881  ·  41
  • E Better Living Through Science and Ponies

    Not all is well in Equestria when a failing portal gun brings Aperture Science to the land of ponies
    39,979 words · 45,939 views  ·  2,654  ·  49
  • T Into The Depths

    Celestia must brave the depths of her old castle to save Twilight and Luna
    44,246 words · 14,119 views  ·  1,259  ·  20
  • E Bureaucracy is Magic

    Can Ponyville survive when our favorite six mares have to fill in for the mayor?
    14,347 words · 5,416 views  ·  547  ·  8
  • E Creeping Darkness

    Alan Wake must write a story where Twilight faces the Darkness of his world to save Equestria
    63,186 words · 6,598 views  ·  691  ·  12

Blog Posts102

  • Friday
    Happy Nightmare Night

    10 comments · 303 views
  • 3w, 2d
    Life Pulse & Nevermind

    12 comments · 519 views
  • 9w, 4d
    Ice Bucket Challenge & Game Project Plug

    So, I was challenge by BronyWriter last evening, and so I had to squeeze this fun little bit of brain freeze in during my morning routine as I got ready for work.

    To reiterate from my video, I challenge Blankedmind, Gremlin Grenade, JustAnotherTimeLord, The Illustrious Q.

    The challenge to Kkat has been retracted. She isn't in a position where she can perform the challenge due to a lack of equipment & funds as well as her personal preferences about the internet.

    Also, on  side note, a project I contributed to is back on Kickstarter. Scott Easley's 3x3 Wildstyle Basketball, a mobile street basketball game. If you supported it last time, please go do so again. If you haven't, please go check it out.

    28 comments · 738 views
  • 13w, 32m
    Bronycon Day 2 Plan * Identifying Attire

    Day one was awesome. Met too many people to list off in these few minutes I have to write this. Today looks to be more awesome and my busiest con day since I have all three of my panels today. I'm wearing an Applejack shirt today and blue jeans. Hope to see you around. Best time to catch me is after my panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Quills and Sofas Hangout - 3:00 - 4:00 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    2 comments · 336 views
  • 13w, 22h
    Bronycon Day 1 Plan & Identifying Attire

    So, since there are folks wanting to meet up with me today, here is a rough idea of where I'll be and when. Also, such a late start today. I slept in, but I had a reason. Work made me stay up all night Wednesday to put out a last minute fire.

    0) 12:00 Float around the convention, likely checking out vendor hall

    1) 2:00 - Vendor Hall Shadow Box booth. Someone ordered something Past Sins related and they wanted me to sign it.

    2) 3:00 - 4:00 - I'll chill out at the Quill's and Sofa's room for an hour. Probably the easiest time you'll have finding me.

    If your looking for me today, I'm wearing a gray plaid long sleeve shirt and blue jeans.

    Hope everyone has a wonderful time at Bronycon today and I hope to see several of you around.

    4 comments · 365 views
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On a dark night filled with even darker magics, an insane cult attempts to give Nightmare Moon a body and life of her own, utterly separate from Princess Luna. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created.

Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. Is she Nightmare Moon reborn or is she simply a doppelganger with a soul and mind of her own? Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat?

Or, will Nyx be forced to inherit the sins that may not even be hers and become the greatest evil Equestria has ever known?

First Published
29th Aug 2012
Last Modified
30th Aug 2012

O

MY

FUCKING GOD

Im going to admit it

i cried a little bit

OMG! It's here finally!

Look out feature box, you are about to be destroyed!

I cannot tell you how much I love this fic.. nah, this should be called a epic!

Can't wait for my copy of the hard back to arrive!

Now If you excuse me, time to celebrate

And here comes the horde

The feature box will never be the same...

Oooh, you brought it here!

The Feature Box will be broken for a month now. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmm... I've heard of this story before...

Dear god........:yay: Also We are going to need a new featured box.....

YES!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!!!

Oh, God I have waited for this moment! NOW TO READ AND NOT LEAVE MY ROOM! :rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

YOU STOLE THIS STORY!!!

R.I.P Featured Box :ajsleepy:

Glad to see it finally up here Pen Stroke, sorry I kind of dropped off on helping with it :pinkiesad2:

Well, it'll be good to finally read this one.

This story is one of my favourite fim-fictions and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I'm very pleased to see it here! :twilightsmile:  

>>1181047

No this is perfectly legit.

I can confirm it.

I love this story!! I listened to it of youtube from Vozdesuenos, and when he hasn't updated, I pretty much read the rest of the way. Bravo my friend, bravo!:rainbowdetermined2::eeyup::ajsmug:

YES! I have been waiting for this!

And there it is, the perfect excuse that I needed to read this again. THANK YOU! Take it, take them! all of my yays!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

I still haven't read this...

IT IS TIME!

OH NOES...  All those other stories I have to read are gonna get pushed back in the queue, just so I can reread another.  :yay:

Just to be sure... This is the FINISHED version, right? No more being told we need to re-read chapters...

(Also, Everfree 2012 writing panel shoutout! Woo!:pinkiehappy:)

Promised myself to reread this when it would be posted here. Looking forward to it...

Huzzah! I was wondering if this ever would make it on this site. Time for a reread!

>>1181047 Actually, this is the guy who wrote it, Pen Stroke. He just finally decided to bring it here.

Been meaning to read this ever since I finished Fallout: Equestria. Needed a super epic fanfic to read.

This one I think I can and need to manage. Background Pony's chapters are just too long...

Time to become even more well-read!

oh god, there goes my social life

EEE!!!

It's here it's finally hear.  Well I know what I'm doing for the wrest of the day.

O my....Past Sins here? Instant Fave!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I've been waiting for a chance to celebrate something Fanfiction related so here's to Past Sin on FimFiction commence the fireworks

This story took me around 18 hours straight to read. Meaning I read this for 18 hours straight. I loved every bit of this story on Google Docs, so I will do my part and like and favorite this story to help the cause of getting this story to the Feature Box. :ajsmug:

>71 likes

>4 views

Seems legit.

Anywho, now that this is finally on fimfiction, I shall read it for the first time. Time to initiate Operation: Ignore Hype.

For all the controversy around this fic, I personally find it quite enjoyable.

Well, I'm taking shelter for the rest of the day.

I hope the world is still there when I return.

Within five minutes it's already taken over the feature box

There are a lot of good moments in this story, but this chapter, "missing joy", is probably my favourite.

Ivan receiving the impression that this story might be worth reading.  I suppose I shall read it then.

>>1181110 I know, it's crazy, it's almost like it's been around for months and people who've read it before are pre-emptively liking it. MADNESS.

>>1181088  Agreed, and not just cause that Colgate is creeping the everything outta me...

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