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User ID: 3,291
Registered: 6th Nov 2011
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Warning: Kind of spoilery to Past Sins

So, with the changes done to Past Sins for it's Season 2 upgrade, one part that changed was how Luna was portrayed. In the original version, Luna went from what we see of her in Season 1 to something close to how she appeared in Season 2 in the final chapter of the story. Honestly, it was kind of cool at the time to see canon Luna did go through a growth spurt similar to what I had described in story.

Still, with the Season 2 update to the story, I now had to start with Luna as she was in Luna Eclipsed and make her mature again to something closer to Celestia. Personally, I don't see it as a far stretch as something that could happen, but describing it was a bit of a challenge at the time.

Now, you may be asking why I bring this up at all. Well,  I was checking EQD's drawfriend today, one of the images featured is just too perfect. It fits very closely with how I pictured Luna becoming if she were to go through another growth spurt and become more like Celestia. And, so I decided it to share it with everyone here real quick.

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Now, to clarify, this wasn't a request or commission or anything like that. This is just a happy coincidence that I decided to talk about and share. So, for those who have ever had trouble picturing Luna as she was at the end of Past Sins or during Winter Bells, that's picture up there is darn close to how I personally imagined her to be.

Pen Stroke · 617 views · Edited 3d, 10h ago

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#555466 · 10h, 44m ago · · ·
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>>540615 Hello, I have sent the small letter to you. On your email adress, of course, but you haven't responded yet.I think that you just haven't read it, have you? So please check out your email =)

#551909 · 2d, 8h ago · · ·
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You are quite the talented writer, but I think you rushed "Better Living Through Science and Ponies" a little bit. Also I was wondering what your thoughts on Nightmare Rarity are.

#551580 · 2d, 12h ago · · ·
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Hi

i just wanted to tell you that i LOVED:heart: Creeping Darkness

and thanks to it i found this website so thank you!:pinkiehappy:

#547909 · 4d, 12h ago · · ·
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um pen stroke do you mind if i use nyx in one of my stories i am writing? ill give you credit for nyx and stuff if you do let me use nyx

#546347 · 5d, 11h ago · · ·
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Hey there, thanks for the favorite on When The Field Becomes Fallow.

I worked really hard on it, and seeing other authors approve of it is a real confidence booster!

#545306 · 6d, 3h ago · · ·
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>>545168 vary nice  words :twilightsheepish: Thay made me cry.

#545168 · 6d, 4h ago · · ·
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There are no words that describe your works. I'm still reading Past Sins, but I cannot verbally, or in the written word, describe how great and talented you are as an author. I'm even tearing up right now! Really!

You are like the pony equivalent of Shakespeare. A master of the Equestrian language and an even more masterful storyteller.

May your quill be always inked, and may your imagination never die . . .

I salute you . . .

#544590 · 6d, 10h ago · · ·
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>>540615 Hay Pin go look at this story he wonts your feedback.:pinkiehappy:

#542018 · 1w, 1d ago · · ·
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So much to read. So much to read!

As slowbro95 bangs his head on desk. Uuu my head hurts I need to sleep. But no I must cheap  reading.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#540693 · 1w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>540615 ok i under stand.

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