• Member Since 9th Jun, 2014
  • offline last seen Sep 19th, 2014

Checkspark


Daughter of Chipshoulder and Legally Blonde, Unicorn, Canterlot School for Gifted young Mares and Stallions, Happy, Crazy pinkie-pie like personality. Loves Pink and Green.

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Everyone knows about the Sisterhooves Social. It's simple, really. Races, contests, and fun. But underneath that there's a history, a history Applejack is really excited to explain.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

Well...I do like it more than your other story but I still feel like the chapters are way too short for this kind of thing. Maybe take one or two ideas and really flesh them out into longer stories.

okay, I'll make the chapter stories longer. I kinda felt that way too - thanks a ton!!

4567907 Just had a really good idea. I'll put all the back-stories in one chapter, and then have a plot line build from that - like ponies having similar experiences at the social or applejack trying to bring back her parents (naw thats actually a really bad idea: applejack isn't into reincarnations) or there actually being a hidden history that nopony knows about behind the social or something like that. Make it a little less lighthearted.:pinkiecrazy:

4570909 That sounds like a wonderful idea :twilightsmile: if you need help editing I'll gladly look over it for you.

4570979 THANKS!
you know, I see a lot of things online with two people like yelling at each other in text and then just hating on each other forever. I'm SOOOOOOO glad this turned out different! I'll run the rough draft of the plot by you when I finish it :raritystarry:

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