History of the Sisterhooves Social

by Checkspark

Brotherhooves Social

Author's Note:

USED INKROSE'S APPLE FAMILY NAMES AGAIN.
(FOR MORE DETAIL ON HOW I DO NOT MEAN ANY COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT, SEE NOTE ON CH. 2)

"Now, today's story happens 25 years ago, when the Sisterhooves Social was celebrating it's 25th anniversary." Applejack began.

"oooh! oooh! Big Mac should tell THIS story!" Apple Bloom waved her hoof in the air.

"And why is THAT?" Applejack inquired, an eyebrow raised

"Because he was THERE!"

"But he was barely born"

"an' you WEREN'T born!"

"APPLE BLOOM! You don't argue with me, understood?!"

Apple Bloom sighed."Fine,"

"BUT, Big Mac, would you do the honor?"

"EEEYUP." And so the story began. Big McIntosh sat down and began telling the story. "for the 25th anniversary, Sweet Apple Acres hosted not only a race for sisters, but also one for brothers on the same course. Now my father, Big Washington, wanted to race, but he didn't have any brothers: just a sister. He and Sweet Apple were married, and so Sweet Apple decided to dress up as a colt to compete. Right after the normal Sisterhooves race, she ran off to change. Big Washington and Sweet Apple ran the whole course, and nopony knew that they weren't brothers, let along that they weren't both stallions. The only problem was that everypony was really confused that Sweet Apple wasn't there to cheer on her favorite stallion." All the young ponies applauded Big Mac. Almost none of them had hears dim say more than a simple EEEYUP in all the times they had seen him. It was getting late, and all the young ponies headed home.

"Hey, thanks for telling the story, big brother," Applejack whispered

"EEEYUP"

Comments

[Howling Wolves]

Well...I do like it more than your other story but I still feel like the chapters are way too short for this kind of thing. Maybe take one or two ideas and really flesh them out into longer stories.

[Checkspark]

okay, I'll make the chapter stories longer. I kinda felt that way too - thanks a ton!!

[Checkspark]

4567907 Just had a really good idea. I'll put all the back-stories in one chapter, and then have a plot line build from that - like ponies having similar experiences at the social or applejack trying to bring back her parents (naw thats actually a really bad idea: applejack isn't into reincarnations) or there actually being a hidden history that nopony knows about behind the social or something like that. Make it a little less lighthearted.

[Howling Wolves]

4570909 That sounds like a wonderful idea if you need help editing I'll gladly look over it for you.

[Checkspark]

4570979 THANKS!
you know, I see a lot of things online with two people like yelling at each other in text and then just hating on each other forever. I'm SOOOOOOO glad this turned out different! I'll run the rough draft of the plot by you when I finish it