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Cold Spike


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Waking up as something different should shock people, it should make you scream and cry out in agony. A human one night, a pony the other. Except for Samantha. How long can she trick the residents of Ponyville that she is a normal pony? How long would it take a care free town to realize something is up with the new pony in town? Considering all the crazy folk that live there... they may never notice a thing.

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Oh man does this girl have Attention Deficit Ooh Shiny! :unsuresweetie:

I want to see more of what happens to Samantha! Haha, and if the mane six try to give her mental help because she's crazier than Pinkie, or just kind of ignore her because she's so odd. Or maybe, maybe she'll confess she's from the human world and the six will think she's crazy but Twilight will totally understand because she knows the human world herself and try to help her get back but she's stuck there forever and Samantha has a total breakdown and goes completely insane!!!

Then again, I should just leave it to the writer to do all the planning and writing of his awesome story. ^-^

Love it~

~Flow

4559899 Yeah... the human world Twi knows is technically non Canon. Not to mention the fact that it involves anthropology ponies and I never watched it lol. As for her fate.. we'll see.

Alrighty. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be waiting. ^-^

~Flow

4560584 May be a bit because it's not written out :twilightblush:

I can wait. After all, I've got stories of my own I have to finish, one before this Friday. Aye!
But I've got it fleshed out in my head, and most of it written. So, yeah.

~Flow

this is interesting really interesting :pinkiehappy:

4569442 I hope I can keep it interesting :pinkiegasp:

Its cute for now but I can feel its going to get sad when she realises she can't go home.

4572447 Because who would give up a world full of ponies and candy?! :pinkiegasp:

To be honest, I'm not 100% sure what I plan on doing about going home or not. I may even surprise you all with a new idea that hasn't been done before, who knows.


4572459 ya but at first she might start thinking about home and then she gets sad because she does it know how to go home and thats what I was think. Not that have any clue of the hows and ifs in the future of this awesome story. p.s. xbox one sucks at trying to write anything!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

4573823 Xbox One does indeed suck, while Microsoft holds it's reins. But what does it have to do with writing? Oh..... stop using an Xbox One please :rainbowkiss:

4570241
though I did notice a small error with Pinkie's character

Pinkie was caught off guard for a moment, I mean who gets that excited over candy?.

Pinkie would also get over excided about candy in fact I believe Pinkie would think Samantha is really fun because Samantha is acting like Pinkie :pinkiehappy:

4576492 Who in the show acts like Pinkie? :derpytongue2: No one really.

4576497
understanding Pinkie is the hardest thing to do :pinkiehappy:
but what I do know is that Pinkie does know when to be responsible :pinkiesmile:
and that Pinkie loves to be silly
and by that confusing Pinkie logic, Pinkie would assume Samantha is being normal

4574845 No keyboard so I scroll for every letter in the slowest way possible also I just found out they do have one so off to game stop I go.

4578045 *omnoms our PS4 to keep it safe*

4578048 One of this days I will own a PS4 and I will never leave home aging!


so... hows that story going?

I'd kiss you if it did it leave lipstick on the TV :pinkiehappy:

they are going to accuse Samantha as a changeling and she is going to start crying :pinkiegasp:
then Fluttershy and Pinkie will hug her and then she will not like the others :pinkiehappy::fluttershysad:

4623003 You're missing the big picture here! Sweetie Belle got her pretty mark! :pinkiegasp:

You got the cutie mark crusaders in my eyes, hilariously on the spot!

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Continue or I shall eat your soul!!! *roars like a lion*

~Flow

Well, at least Samantha has a towel out of all this. With a few sticks and a length of twine she can have a shelter, and it will asorb rainwater for future use.

If all else fails I'd think Ponyville would have a shelter for the poor, or in the worst case scenario Samantha will have a room in the hospital with food, care, and games.

4624891 She would have those things, the first part, if she was older... :derpytongue2:

The Cutie Mark Crusaders were hilarious.

I’m liking this so far. Definitely looking forward to more. And I think you got the CMC just right.
”You’re a comeback!”:rainbowlaugh:

Great chapter! All the characters were acting just right to their situation as if this were to ever happen, Twilight was being Twilight. Raninbow Dash was being none other than herself. Applejack just on the spot! And Mayor Mare was great, Roseluck kind of freaked me out, but, that's okay. Gives her character.

~Flow

4956556 Thank you... now if only more commented :pinkiecrazy:

comment! :derpytongue2:
nice chapter, though, I'm sure she will blow up the job, when will they intergate her?

4956743 Integrate? Hmm...:rainbowkiss:

Dunno yet, maybe they never will :trollestia:

I love this story it's adorable
once Fluttershy finds out Samantha is homeless she's going to be supper upset that she did not notice and did not help :fluttercry:
and Pinkie is going to be the same but will try to cheer a clueless Samantha up :pinkiesad2:

4957354 She sort of helped :rainbowkiss: :rainbowlaugh: I mean... she didn't hurt the situation.

Good chapter. I do think we need more characterization for Samantha though. Then again, it's still early in the story, so there's plenty of time for that.

4962773 I was trying to make her a bit silly I suppose.

5145974 Actually My Little Dashie had like 20 years in the real world and maybe a week in Equestria? Something like that... mines does not. Eventually it will be explained though.

5145989 But if everyday in Equestria was one month in her world, then why wouldn't her mom be freaked out that she was missing for a month? Remember, she was in Equestria for a day or two :derpytongue2:

5146034 DUN DUN DUN... but you're basically right about time stopping.

“Right. Say… have you seen Samantha recently? Ah mean since the party?”

Applejack grabbed her hat and inspected it, then placed it firmly back on her head. “Not exactly, no. Ah was just wondering if she was actin’ odd to you?” The mare blushed and looked away. “I normally don’t pry into other ponies business, but she was hanging out with the Crusaders today.”

It seems like a response from Twilight's missing here.

5146064 And that's why I don't fully trust Google Docs sometimes... thank you. :ajsleepy:

Thanks for continuing this, I primarily say this because when I read the part about Samantha waking up I thought that it would be a quick way to cut to an ending for a fic... and I would be sad if this got a sudden finish as such.

Also, mystery and enlightenment abound, I look forward to Samantha being forced to grow up due to being an 'adult' in Equis, and how that will influence her at home.

5146134 There are actually many ways I can go with this story.. kind of brain storming at the moment. But thanks for the suggestion, it may go in that direction. It also may not.

Oh god I was scared you ended it there...

Oh dear. Please don't make it seem ended like that I was about to cry and wonder, "Always at the good part too!"

I'm gonna go and sit in a corner now..

~Flow

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