With a heavy breath, steeped in sorrow.
A man on a hill will judge your 'morrow.
He'll determine if he wants you dead.
Or if he wants you to live on instead.
He's lost, you know, but he has no clue.
He doesn't know to what good men allude.
Of morals and conscience, of peace of mind.
These are all things he's left far behind.
And now, at last, he knows he can change.
But first, the future is what he must arrange.
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Mmm, maybe a little repetitive in the prose early on, but given the style/info given/left out that's hard to avoid.
Pretty poetic narrative, and many questions have arised as well. Consider me simultaneously confused and interested.
One edit, it isn't (it's) for possessive there at the end.
It's (its). ^^
As much as I'd love to give this a go. I am currently battling the two longest HiE on the site(Both damn good I might say). But once I am done with those two I am betting that this story has progressed far enough for me to really immserse myself in it
3189549 what stories are you reading this time
3189580 look up the HiE tags and sort by word count. The first two.
"An enemy by-passed ceases to be an obstacle. An enemy destroyed ceases to be a threat. Never confuse the two." - (I forget)
Good story so far, looking forward to the next chapter.
I read the description and could only hear it in this voice...
I would have said something along the lines of "Crippling it would of caused it starve, killing was a mercy".
lately, it just seems like there are less quality HiE's these days
, but i like this one, Lucid
if you know what I mean.
... An update? Are my eyes deceiving me?
Now I wonder if that was on purpose.
Well, let´s compromise and call it interesting crap? Joking aside, you have my interest.
I want more of this crap.
where do you get these pictures
5888747
Searching "Steampunk Eye" or "Gear Eye" bring up a lot of cool results.
Well, what I've read so far is really great and most certainly not "crap" in my own humble opinion.