With Earth destroyed and humans colonizing the solar system, they greatly overestimated the world. While their technology grew stronger, faster, and better, the world around them decayed. Now humanity refuses to associate itself with the lost planet Sunsia, the other colonies close to declaring war. With no way to get off of the concrete jungle they live on, their only hope could possibly a certain cyan pony with an affinity for speed.
(Big thanks to Grzyby for helping to edit this story.)
Chapters (6)
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the story so far plz make more
4628937 It does say incomplete, doesn't it?
if they amputated her wing Celestia help them cuz rainbow is going to be MAD
...So! Another day, another teleportation spell.
And another unknown world. Good premise - I got to read this just because of the title.
There is AWFUL LOT of mistakes. I the story makes me interested, I might propose myself to be your proofwriter.
Aite, I like seeing where this follows. Have a like, fave and a PM.
WHAT pinkies pinky sense can tell all that
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
dat chapter title
You mean train?
somersault?
to light up
Come on, finish it with the dot brother.
her hoof
She panicked
1)TV is so popular as an abbreviation, that it doesn't need dots. It is commonly accepted as is.
2) "and began to enjoy it" sounds better IMO.
3) starting new sentence - So much that
there he is
watching as many shows
Again, TV! You can relax with it, don't be so pedantic about it.
*Grammar Nazi mode off* Looks like a lot of work ahead of you.
Yep, I'm back in the game.