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BubbleyBathTub


-AVERAGE PONY- Don't mind me, just another average pony.

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Twilight wakes up, strapped to a hospital bed with a nasty enchantment that begs the question, why do they want to keep her here so badly? Stuck in a dream for two days, and with a little filling in from her friends, she learns that not only she has amnesia, she perhaps committed some very terrible crimes to pony kind. The mystery only gets deeper from there as conspiracy theories, tragic lifes and the severity of Twilight's madness gets uncovered.
Needless to say, she breaks free.
(This story takes place right after/in between Lesson Zero.)

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 32 )

thumb up cause i like the idea

well i liked the idea behind the story but its so very confusing to read


4381491 :pinkiecrazy: Don't worry, those are just the voices in my head arguing. I have trouble writing filler in when I'm excited for a story... :p You have to read it kinda slowly, sorry. :pinkiesad2:

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That's the premise behind insanity.Voices in your head telling you to do things.Also,Twilight isn't sane,so the story should move to flow WITH her insanity.Ie:A non-linear storyline.

4381703 i might have to re read at some point because i meant i was confused as too i didnt know who was talking when, i basically got lost somewhere around the middle of the story

4381703 well I edited anyway, adding more 'describing' words and explaining what's happening. I also added lots of more confusing head trauma and voices conflicting with each other so... I guess I the end I'm just really counter intuitive. :derpytongue2: oh well, I like it better that way anyway. :pinkiecrazy:

Is this based off of Asylum, by Daemon of Decay?

4385449 uh.. Sorry, I don't know what that is so. No. :rainbowhuh: is it any good, cause I might check it out for funzies :twilightsmile:

4385495 It's very good. In fact, it's one of my favorites!

Don't you dare write how Celestia wants to torture Twi and not cure her DONT YOU DARE:flutterrage::trixieshiftleft:

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!?!?

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My exact thoughts through the entire fic.:applejackconfused:

4462223 I can't tell if that is a compliment or an insult. :applejackconfused:

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We'll see by the end of the story.:twilightsheepish: Keep writing.

More we need mmoooorrreeee :pinkiegasp::flutterrage:

Ahem..... So as I was saying I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

P.S. I'm curious to see why Celestia was acting so weird(different) about something bad happening to her most loved for student.

So.

Celestia's solution to this problem was just to skip examining Twilight and go right to giving a magic slave collar to five mares with good reason to hate Twi in order to rehabilitate her? Which was doomed to failure as Twi is possessed by a serial killer that Nightmare Moon dragged along. And said serial killer was exposed after five minutes of somepony with a brain actually trying to figure out what the hell was up.

So, how much head trauma has Celestia suffered recently? Even if Twi had just gone insane, she should have been examined treated by professionals instead of the local animal hoarder and Canterlot Wannabe.

Professionals skilled in psychiatry and noticing that their patient inexplicably explodes into flame when exposed to sunlight. Most sentient creatures would start to question the entire sunlight = fire thing.

Celestia IS THE NEXT NIGHTMARE :pinkiegasp: we shall not bend to your will Solar Flare :rainbowkiss::derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh:
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::twilightsheepish:

4528841 All hail the glorious Solar Empire! :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

I like Twilight's use of the Stone Spell. Actually, the entire premise of her being weak to sunlight is pretty cool.

No matter how ridiculous it was, I thought her yelling out her reason for being their hilarious.

4526131 This comment makes me want to read this story more. Why? I need my life back. I almost escaped. :fluttercry:

Yes, plot is building at a good pace, good tempo. It is very enjoyable, but I am just tiiiny liitle bit :pinkiecrazy: concerned that...
To me, it feels like it is prone to lose its consistency anytime. And that wouldn't be a nice sight :applecry:
I believe in Diamond Tiara. She is believable :heart:

this is turning into a great story i eagerly await your next chapter when you finally are off you hiatus:twilightsmile:

YAY :yay::pinkiehappy:finally new chapter, even though its kinda short:unsuresweetie:

There are so many typos in here I didn't make it through the chapter.

Interesting so far, but I do wonder why Diamond Tiara is there. I assume it'll be explained later.

The teleporting behind bushes reminded me of Dishonored(Blinking) in the way it was described. :twilightsmile:

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