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Trixies First Show

Trixie had just gotten her cutie mark. She left home, and is now traveling the road. All she has is her carriage and her prized possessions. But of course Trixie is new to the harsh and unforgiving ponies that she meets in Canterlot.

(my first fim fiction and definitely not my last. Hope you enjoy.)

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Rose Quartz

Rose Quartz #1 · May 10th, 2014 · · ·

Was that unicorn Shining Armor?

UnibrowSheepZ

UnibrowSheepZ #2 · May 10th, 2014 · · ·

I quite liked this little story, there wasn't any grammar or spelling errors that i saw, although some of the pacing seemed a bit rushed at times, for example, when the ponies came up to challenged Trixie, i though that could be stretched out just a tiny bit more. I enjoyed the "only to notice the unicorn with the cutie mark of a shield, is gone." part, it implied Shining, and i makes you think what his motives are. So yeah, not bad for a first story.

TheExhaustedBrony

TheExhaustedBrony #3 · May 10th, 2014 · · ·

I never get tired of finding an authors' first work and loving it. This was a very nice story here. Sure there are some places that could use a bit of touching up as far as grammatical stuff is concerned but other than that, the content is solid (to me at least). I'm looking forward to seeing what else you create in the future.

Grzyby