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This story is a sequel to Falling Backwards
This is the long anticipated Sequel to Falling Backwards by Tofu-Monstrosity. This entitles the tales of raising the newly filly-ized Rainbow Dash, and the troubles that brings. There will be tears, there will be happiness. But most of all: THERE WILL BE FILLIES!!
(if anyone can write a better synopsis please feel free and pm it to me, ill credit you... im usually good, but im stumped on this one.)
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Huh, could it be that Rainbow Dash is starting to regain parts of her memory?
is she starting to remember things?
YAY!
NO BUCKING WAY.
Also, needs a proofreader. Badly.
Can't wait until the next chapter
4431083 We will see. And we will see how she like it when she finds out the Age Spell is a one way ticket without the Alicorn Amulet and has to grow up again... Discord would LOVE it^^
Grammar everywhere, so much dialogue, and this is nowhere near the quality of the original. Did you have anyone even look at it before you posted this? This needs cleaning up. Also, while I'm sure it may be mentioned elsewhere, but did you get permission to continue this? If you did no problem but if not, you might be in trouble. But Please get someone to read this and check it before you post the next chapter.
4431554 the author dose not permission to continue this because this story a sequel to a story that the author made
4431620
...What? I assume that you meant that he does not need permission to write this. While that is technically true, it is very impolite. And that was only a minor grump I had about this fic. My main problem was that it completely reversed the character development from Falling Backwards. In addition, the writing itself is nowhere near the quality of the original as well.
4431636 i men't that and ok and i still like this sequel a lot that i want to see more chapters for this story
4431529 Well, it could be worse. She could've regained her memoires only to find out that she'd been regressed to an infant. At the very least her friends were kind enough to leave her as a filly with a cutie mark. The last thing Equestria needs is another Cutie Mark Crusader.
4431661 Especially when this Crusader is Rainbow Dash. But it would be interesting when Dashie was regressed to an infant and then get suddenly her memories back... maybe when she get a diaper change from Twilight^^
Um... I'll give my thoughts in different ways.
As a stranger:
A sequel to a story I really liked. Not bad for for a first chapter. Please continue.
As a friend(?, not really comfortable with that word with someone I met through the internet, so... acquaintance.)
It's okay. That's stinger sucked out the so-called "Feels", AKA Legitimate drama, out. But that's your choice, do what you like.
As a critic:
It feels like an watered down Hollywood sequel which plays up the wackiness, not to mention pointless. It's as necessary as a sequel as your story Princess Filly'tia. It also does that it follows a (sorta) popular that Super-Stallion seemed to have chain reacted. To be fair everyone involved with it does it (Night--Mist, Sky Hooves), I'm the exception to that rule. But in my offence I only notice that because, I'm SS's editor. But don't give up. Everything grows their beard if they try. Not to mention, I'm kinda curious. BUT! It does feel kinda insulting that she seemed to gain her memory back/or reverted back before she got mentally regressed by a bump on her head. An editor or proof reader helps too. But others might have pointed that out already.
If someone has valid arguments I'll take somethings back.
4431675 Lucky for Twilight that won't be the case.
4431291 dont worry, im aware of the needed proofreading
4431554 its an official sequel as well. tofu is writing thier (his/her) own sequel, and i have permission to write it.
4431636 and im aware the quality of the work is not as good... but im not tofu.. everyone has a different writing style, and not everyone has complete dedication. this is simply a side hobby, as my true calling is graphics.
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Understandable, Good luck on writing this regardless if my previous comments insulted you. I was not intending to insult I am just bad at constructive criticism.
4432322 Need an lousy voice actor or writer?
4432918 if you really care to help once again firebird, youre more than welcome.
4433054 Are we talking about editing or the making games.
If editing: I kinda walked into that one. It be rude to turn it down now. Give me a few days though, busy schedule. I kinda wanted to stop editing, (Foal Adventures being a exception to to rule.)
If games: I'll do my best.
It's probably the first one.
4433072 actually, I was thinking voice actor for zoromon tcg, but you're welcome to edit.
4433194 I'll do both then. PM for a link of that Zoromon thing, and I'll cook up a demo reel.
Why is egghead so funny?
4434888 I don't understand what you're asking?
BRILLIANT!!! NEXT CHAPTER!!! HURRY!!!!
4437442 it may be awhile, we are all going in between The Return of Prince Grey Ghost, The Foalish Zone, and this story. you should definately check out the other stories
4437802 okai
good work tho with this one 
oh shit!
A synopsis you say.
This story is an authorized alternative sequel to Falling Backwards (Because you say it it, might as well clear that up at the beginning)
It's been one week since a failed stunt left Rainbow Dash with a shattered mind. Her friends have had one week of an adult Rainbow Dash with the mind of a toddler. Now Dash has the body of one too.
Wow diamond tiara go up to the two year old and scream BLANK FLANK! in the middle of their conversation. Real smooth
4454763 had to have a chance to make fun of them both... just be happy it didnt end like autmn breezes story, where diamond tiara lost her cutie mark, got it back with diapers
4455258 Do you have a link to said story?
4461198 yes... Pm me
so she is getting her memory's back?
4470114 yes...
OH CRAP!
4470627 yeah.... dont worry. Shagohad and i are soon to be working on Chapter 2
well, this got strange very fast. can't wait to see what happens next!
4474511 holy response time batman!! I just posted it like mere seconds ago...
Unless... You're from the future and you knew exactly when I'd post it, so you waited for the exact moment after reading it in the future so you could be the first to comment....
Or youre just bored online...
Yeah I like the first idea better.
But yeah... I'm also open for ideas.. I probably won't implement them all, but I'm willing to take suggestions in pm.
4474527 curses, my identity has been revealed! i must flee!
but before i do, i'll throw out a couple of ideas. can't hurt.
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it's funny; the only thing i'm coming up with is ideas for a romance story, which this is not. eh, i'll keep thinking and get back to ya if i come up with anything. it's 11:30 pm here, so i'm running on empty.
If anyone can guess who our villain will be, you;ll get a cookie. Hint: It's a mythological figure.
4474553 It's Tirek. I want now my cookie, please.
4474572 Not even close.
What happened to Chrysalis what will Rainbow do...guess I'm going to have to wait to find out you have my attention now.
4474578 darn...
4474623 Care for another guess?
4474628 I'm really out of ideas in the moment. Lets see if another one has a idea.
4474553 hades, or kronos
4474934 Your close but nope