This story is a sequel to The Club's Connected to the Boutique
Canterlot, WUBS, Derpy, Celestia... All of these are related, but to find out how we have to go waaaaaay back..... And I mean waaaaaaaaaaay back... At least Vinyl Scratch is here to entertain the rest of us!!
WARNING: This story will involve regression, to one, if not a couple mares, and regress them into fillies.
Edit: I have changed the name of the fic, as sadly the path I wanted to follow originally in this story is one I found out I could not write. I love derpy, but I'm not a good Ditsy author. Sorry folks...
Edited by firebirdabirdoffire
Derpy did it again.
Umm.... 2 favorites in less than an hour... Im not that good am i?
Have a like sir
I like it UPDATE please
This is very good! UPDAAATE
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If yall truly love it, go over to Super Stallion's page and read Foal Adventures, Dashie Wins Big and Zorath and the DragonSlayers are both upcomiing creations of mine. They will be released when Castle Chaos completely comes out.
why is this so hated? i see nothing wrong with it, the idea is good, your spelling is good, it's a great story, i can think one thing i don't like, it's that you mead me want to read a Rarity/Vinyl romance with Twi and that's not your folt, so i say this is amazing X3
3772903 actually there isn't a romance with twilight... Twilight was just the first character I could think of... The story behind Rarity Scratch is just an alt universe..
3773014 i know there is no romance that's why i said "want to read a Rarity/Vinyl romance with Twi" knowing that it's not going to happen and i did Rarity/Vinyl as in there the same pony
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It's hated because the grammatical competence is on par with a third-grader who has yet to discover the wonders of auto-correct.
And, judging by your comment, you're not one to champion "your spelling is good" statements.
3774900 lulz love that statement.... I tola everyone im not perfect, plus im trying to write these quick and without an editor to help... So what do yiu expect? Plus stupid office on my tablet doesnt even offer autocorrect. Like i said, not perfection, butim not trying to be.
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>Dat comment
Ugh.
If you're not going to try, don't even bother posting. Even on the infinite scale of the internet this is a waste of space.
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Shut up Simon Cowell! Don't pay attention to this guy he's a common jerk.
3776794 Onyx.... Im not baffled, It is after all a free country. He may say what he wishes, but I take bitching like I take spam in my email, straight through my ears/inbox and back out to the trash. I accept good and bad criticism, and he is in fact quite a good author. But not all of us has All the time in the world to be writing. I write for fun, as a hobby. But when it comes to bitching, I could care less
3777648 well, as I was typing my explanation on the entire story so far, my internet decided to crash and lose my page worth of a comment.... Ugh... But I do enjoy your comments, and I will say I will take what you have said into account, but yes rarity is meant to be in this story, more will be revealed soon. And yes I do need an editor, but unless someone offers, eh.... And what made Solaria more powerful (she was a Pegasi because celestia had.... Done a royal pegasi to get her.) Because of the same force that turned both Luna. And sombra evil. And she killed her daughter because it was about 100 years before she banished NMM, and that alone was accidental..... So she had no clue she could do it.
is there going to be mommy Twi?
3777746 hmmm celestia is a filly, who is staying with twilight... I'm not saying yes... But I'm not saying no.. ;) Mr follower of lake...
3777783 well you stated that she's acting younger and she only trust Twi also you made Twi act different to her, that's why i thought it
3777799 eeyup
3777970 ... you just said yes
3777980 eeyup
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>Simon
I'm not insulting his singing abilities, you twat.
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You have the spirit of a good author. Keep it up.
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I was wondering the same thing about the Rarity and Vinyl thing. So far in the story you could've said they're cousins, it wouldn't have taken much imagination. We'll just to wait and see.
Also if you're curious, the concept for Rarity/Vinyl originated form this: The Club's Connected to the Boutique
Sorry all, I've been having a rough day and WILL IN FACT not be able to upload my chapter by today. Here is hoping tomorrow isnt as stressful eh?
3784255 yes i did, I had one person agree, then bail on me.
3784255 pm me how you would write it then.... Because Its hard to give it away without citing his exact story.....
3784249 This wouldn't be so confusing if Vinyl and Rarity were just cousins in this story. Unless it factors into the story.
3787067 Wait and see, I guess
3787165 He asked me to do it, but I have my writing hands full already.
3787067 is love to allow it.... But like I said, I need an editor... Im at a block on chapter 4....
3789195 hmm has a feels overload right now, and a severe hatred for crystal shard right now for making me skim thru each and every chapter of Foal Adventures to figure out the father.....DAMN YOU CRYSTALLLLLLLLLLLLLL.... Derp or for those of you naysayers - erpderb in heterb erpherb (cookies for getting that reference)
3790289 sorry that was meant as a broad comment, not meant for a reply to you... Soz man
3792151 talking about super stallions story foal adventures, the castle chaos 10 chapters
3787419 You know what? I give in, I'll edit. I was kinda retired from editing, (Excluding Foal adventures.), but a story with a promising premise deserves one. PM me if you you're interested.
Hey man do you still need help with the story? if you do maybe I can assist.
3835822 Eeyup, I know what I want to do... But Im stuck.... On chapter 4.... That and I've had a lot on my mind...... I just don't know
I forgot to center the chapter title during editing. Oops...
3858938 nah i forgot the end center cap code. ;)
3859053 close... But yet so far from the truth. So close,but no potatoes
lol you messed up my messages X3 because you set the reply and deleted the chapter, it now says you replied and but the reply is gone so it won't get rid of it
3859082 I personally thought either Solaria's offspring of just Solaria in some way or another.
3859199 closer than maroon, but still no chicken
3859112 all I said was that I promised a chapter before march 1st and I made the promise
3859307 but you the chapter so fimfiction is saying i got a reply when i don't, you made a glich (note: i love gliches so i don't care that i got one X3)
the set up and cover image entail a fun filled comedy , but then you immediately throw the sad/slice of life wrench into it , doesn't work at all....
Well ive reached 6000 words.... Whoop
I'm confused, in the 1st captor, you made out they are in the same body now your saying there not
Actually... i never said they were in the same body.... I said they were once in the same body....