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Poor Cadance. Oh well, all the more for Luna!
Upvote, Fave/track and a watch.
Damn! SAxPL, going to follow this hot forbidden love affair!
And molestia was watching like
Hey add more to this it is.bomb Luna best pony pleas.add more
But then
Ecchh!
I hate it when ficcers turn canonically straight characters gay. Especially in their own bloody stories what the hell was that pointless crap about?
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In deed, I did not enjoy the "surprise". Plus, you might want to add a m/m warning tag to that chapter.
Other than that I still think its an interesting read. I'll keep following for now.
Okay, this is more drama and plot and I am happy to say SA is still a stallion. As for the forbidden romance, Man, who knew SA was that blunt with his explanation. Go for it you pony, the moon beckons you oaf!
WHAT? She, but... well damn!
Shining Armor go on with your plan. You deserve better than her.
That final paragraph...the line about being suspect if she couldn't hold her relationship...makes me think something else is going on with Cadence
Really well written and the growing web of intrigue and relationships is stacking up and will come crashing down soon. It remains to see how these ponies react when things come to light. #dramabomb Your biggest success so far is in the characterization especially making these powerful and Nobel characters very 'human' I this conflict.
Okay, so... Yeah first parts was... something, just...
the second part does cover their relationship
and the last, Watch yourself Shining She's getting a plan in motion, but if the start of this fic is to go by, He isn't exactly caught.
I really been reading this fic for a while, its very well done, the plot is well done, don't know how it is gonna end, but it looks like there is 3 options
Amity, Cadance or Luna
I don't know what are your intentions but i highly suggest to do multiple endings.
Good endings and bad endings, Like 3 good endings, and 1 bad one as Tia send shining to the moon :/
Wow. Just... Wow. So Cadence's solution to believing her husband is cheating on her, is to have revenge-sex via seducing the boyfriend of her best friend, who had nothing to do with any of this. I have to admit, that is probably the single biggest 'dick-move' response I could think of for this situation.
Welp, there goes any sympathy I may have had for Cadence. Now EVERYBODY'S AN ASSHOLE in this Love Triangle (or does Flash make this a Love Square now?)
At this point, I'm hoping this all ends with Twilight bitch-slapping some sense into all of these morons, before unceremoniously dumping Flash (out a window, with both wings broken).
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This, pretty much straight through. Especially since she has no proof he IS cheating!
Seriously Cady. What would you do now if Shining were to walk in to apologize for the fight and provide a truthful explanation - say that he'd had doubts, but wanted to make it work, and hadn't been cheating?
We know he was, but seriously. She doesn't.
Though I wish Flash weren't always pretty much portrayed as scum. I have this horrible feeling that Cadance is going to go throw Flash's infidelity into Twi's face as some warped punishment for not helping her.
Oh man, Shining's and Cady's marriage is completely ruined. At one point you could say that one is right and one is wrong, but clearly we've past that point looong time ago. More or less, they're both at least a bit assholes to each other, aren't they? They both need to find proper happiness somehow.
But honestly though, no one likes a workaholic. Shining go get Luna, she's the one for you!
And Cadence, ehm. Suffer couple years of work stress and after a complete breakdown marry someone you like?
Agreed v
4652534 expect flame twi to make an appearance soon.
Ok... seems like they will definitely break the marrige, not bad ^^
I'm afraid I'm gonna have to disapprove of this story due this chapter. I feel that Camdamce's actions are reprehensible and Flash sentry complying with them even under his intentions of securing a better life for him and twilight is completely short sighted. I have enjoyed the story of so far due to the interesting story line, examination of the relationship of shinning armor, exploring the lives of the royal characters and developing shinning armor, but this chapter leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
4658189 Howdy there! Co-author here. The next chapter will explain WHY Flash did what he did. Short sighed, it may look like that. But in this story, there is ALWAYS an answer. And as for Shining and Luna...well you'll also see. :3 Because now we're back at the beginning of the story, where the real story begins...
4661096 okay. I appreciate the reply and I apologize for my rant, rough day took it out on the story, I will definitely check out the next chapter.
4657840 Thanks for the idea. :3
WAIT! Now Flash is...
DUDE YOU will ANGER not only an Alicorn BUT THE WORLD TRAVELING, EVIL DEFEATING, HEROIC POWER OF MAGIC!
Next Chapter, FRY Flash, Cadence clearly has no brains at this point.
I have a sneaking suspicion I know where this is going to go. I hope not; I don't like it when hard choices are made simple.
Two things.
1: Amity is a humongous hypocrite.
2: I think it should be saying "Cadance" there:
Addendum: Also, Shining has been cheating on Cadance with 2(!) different ponies now. Celestia pushing all blame on Cadance becomes just a bit harder to swallow considering that.
DUN DUN DUUNNN NIGHTMARE CADANCE !!
Nicely done ^^
You know, at this point I'm hoping Twilight's reaction to all this is 'Cadence is obviously Brainwashed by something', and then proceed to summon the rest of the Mane Six and blast Cadence with Rainbow Power. That should help.
Or at least traumatize the shit out of her. That would also work.
YEAH! Shining X Luna WILL happen!
And Cadence can die now for being such a bitch now.
4711894 It's not without reason, and Celestia didn't say Shining was blameless. She was trying to get Cadence to deal with the larger problem: herself
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She kind of does.
She does say Shining isn't blameless, but immediately afterwards, she also said that everything is ultimately Cadance's doing:
Maybe she meant to say Cadance only started things, but that's not how it sounds, and I can understand Cadance not seeing it that way either.
4714735 You have a point... we should probably have balanced that better, but trust me when I say that everything is for a reason. You'll see in upcoming chapters.
Finally! The drama and chaos ensues... Where's discord when you need him?
"What do you mean....? No! My castle!" 
"I'm sorry but your Spirit of Chaos is in another Castle."
That's a lot of realising.
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Aww... No flame twilight? All well...
Wow! If i didn't know any better I'd say that you were sleeplessbrony the legendary Clopfic writer who wrote Romance Reports
WOOOOOOOOOOONAAAAAAAAA!!!
4853109 maybe to some, to me Woona just means, "Luna, that is down to earth." Not being like, a steriotypical member of royalty.
I say lunaaaaaaa
Please let him be with lunaa
Luna go for Lina
I just want things to end the way they were as if nothing happened i love fanfiction that has a huge thing then ends and brings us back ready for saturday.
Go for Luna my friend, everyone will love you for it
Myself included by the way, Cadance can go fuck herself (In this story, sorry Cadance. Love you really!)
4853887 It obvoiusly gonna be luna look at the cover art and the title
Go for Luna already sheesh! If it comes to a different choice your title is completely misleading and the story lightly becomes redundant with Luna ignored.
The most logical choice would be Luna.
However, I'd still wish for something good to happen to Cadance for a change. Her time at the summit hasn't exactly been all that pleasant either. I mean, Shining cheated on her first, he did so with two different ponies, and he came here with the divorce papers already prepared. And that's on top of nopony ever taking her side in anything, or so it must feel to her.
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Cheating on you husband? Sister in law may forgive.
Cheating on you husband with your sister in law's boyfriend? Intentionally? Knowingly?
Twilight forgives. I don't. That's All About Rarity level bullshit, and I say she threw out her sympathy card there. She was tragic before. Now she's lashing out at somepony she supposedly loves to hurt her husband. Family isn't collateral damage good people tolerate.
She could have done anything else and been redeemable. Even love spell him, which I expected her to do here. Instead, she doubled down on her bullshit. Sorry Cady. Time to fly.
AAs for a choice... who says Luna and Amity wouldn't be amenable to sharing?
But if he goes with Cadance, Twi needs to bring the vengeance.
4857934 4857350 The saddest part? Before that, Twilight probably would have sided with Cadence. What Shining did was wrong in the end, even if his reasons were understandable. But yeah, the second she did that, Cadence lost all creditability.
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Actually, if Cadance weren't so obsessed with a binary view, she'd see that everypony WAS taking her side who knew about an affair - even the ponies having it!
Shining didn't think he was right, he just couldn't put up with her bitchiness anymore. If she could have accepted that he could have a reason without that reason being RIGHT, we wouldn't be having this conversation.
Instead, she had to be pure as snow in her mind. She had to be the beleaguered wife she's posing as now. And in acting like that, she became the black hearted bitch she thought they thought she was.
Though another point - seriously Celly, you find out she's threatening Twi and do nothing?