Really well written and the growing web of intrigue and relationships is stacking up and will come crashing down soon. It remains to see how these ponies react when things come to light. #dramabomb Your biggest success so far is in the characterization especially making these powerful and Nobel characters very 'human' I this conflict.
Okay, so... Yeah first parts was... something, just... the second part does cover their relationship and the last, Watch yourself Shining She's getting a plan in motion, but if the start of this fic is to go by, He isn't exactly caught.
I really been reading this fic for a while, its very well done, the plot is well done, don't know how it is gonna end, but it looks like there is 3 options Amity, Cadance or Luna I don't know what are your intentions but i highly suggest to do multiple endings. Good endings and bad endings, Like 3 good endings, and 1 bad one as Tia send shining to the moon :/
Really well written and the growing web of intrigue and relationships is stacking up and will come crashing down soon. It remains to see how these ponies react when things come to light. #dramabomb Your biggest success so far is in the characterization especially making these powerful and Nobel characters very 'human' I this conflict.
Okay, so... Yeah first parts was... something, just...
the second part does cover their relationship
and the last, Watch yourself Shining She's getting a plan in motion, but if the start of this fic is to go by, He isn't exactly caught.
I really been reading this fic for a while, its very well done, the plot is well done, don't know how it is gonna end, but it looks like there is 3 options
Amity, Cadance or Luna
I don't know what are your intentions but i highly suggest to do multiple endings.
Good endings and bad endings, Like 3 good endings, and 1 bad one as Tia send shining to the moon :/